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Chapter 6 Acts of Desperation...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6 Acts of Desperation...
Hey Terry *waves* You're spot on about the issues being forced...but how is the question. Heath hurting Alec...there will be a fall out, but who get's hurt will be interesting to see. Thank you so much for posting a review AND for reading *blushes* Kim -
Chapter 6 Acts of Desperation...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6 Acts of Desperation...
Krisz...YAY!!! Thanks for reading and posting a rewiew. So glad to see you're still hanging with me. Yeah there's a lot to think about and you my dear digging into your mind coming up with a great senerio...super cool. Keep reading all unanswered questions will unravel soon... Kim -
“You know, Heath, you're the only one I feel I can trust,” Simon voiced with soft affection as he dipped his bread into the olive oil. “Yeah?” Heath faintly smiled before slowly taking a sip of wine. “Why?” Simon licked the garlic and crushed pepper from his fingers before grabbing a napkin to wipe his mouth. “Well, because…” He chewed slowly giving himself a moment to reflect. “How long have we known each other now?” “Hum… I don’t know, since junior high?” Heath shrugged casually. “Yeah,
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Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Hey Mike, *waves* I agree re passion, but that heart sometimes has a mind of it's own and life takes over, so your right that's what it's all about. Poor Alec has no idea what's swirling around him, but he will and the question will be how will he deal with it? Thanks so much, Mike for reading and taking the time to post a review, letting me know how you see it...great!! Kim -
Chapter 2 The Act Begins...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 The Act Begins...
Ah yes, Nina is trouble with a capital 'T'. I'm hoping to stick with me on this one. It's drama filled and you might be confused till the end, but it's one of my favorites and as always every questioned will be answered and all things will be tied up in a neat package when it's all said and done...promise. Thanks for deciding to take the ride with Heath and Alec..All aboard!!! Kim -
Awwww...thanks. this story was not filled with drama, just fill good stuff..fluff I love Kaleb and Chase and their little family. so glad you enjoyed them too, dear... Kim
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Danke Nettie Poo.Yeah it was one of the Sunday mornings I was laying in bed and it just came to me...it was short but I hope it hit the point I was hoping to make... Miss ya girl. MWAH
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Chapter 1 At First Glance...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1 At First Glance...
YAY, cattis, welcome to the jungle...hehe, glad you found it and I can't wait to see what you think as the story progresses. Kim -
Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Hey charlie, Dang on it, I missed this the first time around. Short but sweet eh? I'll see what I can do in the next chapter Merci for hanging in there with me, happy to know I haven't lost ya. Kim -
Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Oooo Joann, I love your discription of Simon "Evil wrapped in a pretty package"...Damn that's good. Poor Alec and Heath...poor Nina. you know the old saying, "be careful what you wish for you just might get it" that's all I'm saying on that...Will she cause Alec to doubt...you'll have to read and find out... Thanks for reading Joann and taking the time to post a review, glad I haven't lost ya Kim -
Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Danke, Jammikins, A "trip" is one way to discribe Nina...LOL She's trying to keep her man,we can't be mad at her but looks like she pissed off Heath.. Oh and yeah Simon is in the building and he's going to give everyone a ride for their money. People will remember his name. -
Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Hey Lisa *waves* Yes, Girl Nina is ideed a pill that's hard to swallow, so yeah Heath has his hands full with that one. Think about this *spoiler* perhaps. She doesn't know much about Heath, so what she tells Alec will be her version of the truth...the question is how will Alec respond and will they get a do over of their first date... Thank you, Lisa for sticking with me. This is actually a short story so we about 7 more chapters, but I promise when it's all said and done every question you might have now will have been answered...promise. Kim -
Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
YAY Krisz, Thank you for posting a review...Love it. Glad I could give ya what you needed today...As always my pleasure...*bows humbly* And yes, dear we get to know about Heath's life, not in the next chapter but chapter 7, well we get a skeet taste in the next one, so hang tight and hold what ya got as we say...LOL Again, Krisz, thanks so so much for reading and showing me much love...Right back at ya!!! Kim -
Heath held the bike steady allowing Alec to climb off. "Here you are safe and sound, just like I promised," he smiled then threw a wicked grin before adding, "Well maybe not safe," he winked slyly. "Oh, not safe huh?" Alec laughed handing the helmet to Heath. "Whatever do you mean Mr. Cannon?" He rested his hands on Heath's thigh and licked the corner of his mouth suggestively. Heath snaked his arm around Alec's waist slipping his hand under his shirt causing Alec's breath to hitch when he fel
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Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Scotty, first off, please...please call me Kim and thank you so much for reading and most off all I'm soooo glad you are enjoying the story. Yeppers Heath is in pretty deep already. I listened to Never Close Our Eyes and yes the powerful beat and the words are so Heath and Alec right now. Perfect! Me keeping you wanting more is my job and I love it! Merci for the awesome song pick and the review Stay tuned my friend, Kim -
Hahahaha...Bahahaha Well I'll watch Big Time Rush and Drake and Josh too, and I've even thrown my kids a 'Kids Choice Award' party where they could invite friends. We have lime serbert and sprite for the green slime...I also watch Victorious low key Don't worry I've got your back. No creeper, no sir...LOL
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Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Hey Joann, yep that guilt can be a MF' and Heath is dealing indeed or is his guilt dealing with him? Alec is really really cool and very special. I know everyone is wanting to know whats going on behind the scenes and you all will soon, I promise. Oh and no the person has been following Heath sense he left his place lurking about. you'll find out who it is in the next chapter I think if not it's in chapter 6 I can't remember being that I'm revamping a story I wrote back in 09 it can get a little confusing...but not to worry we will find out. Garci, Joann, love your reviews and appreciate that you take the time to leave one. Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
*Waves* Krisz, yea I think it's safe to say Heath's got a thang for Alec for sure. I kind of think he's had it along. He had 2 weeks of watching his every move so...Actually we find out what they do in the next couple of chaters. As I mention to Conner it's like an onion with layers. Each chapter reveals something else. Like watching a movie where you go "Ohhhh" Our boy Heath might be in over his head on this one. You know those dag on feelings getting in the way...LOL Glad you're still enjoying the story. Stick with me now all you're questions will be answered very very soon. Danke, Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Mike, I'm glad you enjoyed Lulu's. It actually reminds me of a place I went to in Galveston TX. It was a 1st date and I was so scared I didn't want to get out of the car. I did and we had a blast! Your compliments on my writing style always has me in 'Awe' because I really try but I have 'in my humble oppinion' have a long way to go, so you are very encouraging and I thank you. Many many thanks for letting me know you're out there, hanging with me. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story Merci, Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Lisa I casually asked my son about 'Wizards of Weaverly Place,' and yes he's up on it...lol my 15yr old daughter wanted to know what a person on GA was doing watching kids shows..Hahaha I told her you had kids and she was like "still and she's watching a kid show?" My reply I watch 'I Carly' and loved the 'We sing in sillyville' videos. Kids. Now on to the chapter. I'm getting me some ribs on Friday You're absolutely right, Heath has a dilemma on his hands and your right again if he's not careful he could get himself killed. The action starts picking up in the next chapter and goes on till the very end so I'm hoping it will be a fun ride for you all. Thanks so much for still reading and letting me know what you think of each chapter and the characters. Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Alec is pretty cool, which Heath is fastly learning not to mention he's falling hard for the guy. We find out who was in the car in the next chapter, and oh yes my dear there are a lot of bad things in this story's future... Merci for everything intune I really appreciate it sooo much. Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Yes indeed the inner struggle can be a bitch and Heath is dealing with it or is it dealing with him. Lulu's sounds like a great place to just let your hair down and enjoy some good home cooking. speaking of...things are heating up between Alec and Heath and expect it to get hot in here..LOL Thanks for all your help with this story and for posting a reveiw Jammikins -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
RC, Heath is an interestering person. as promised we will learn more about him in the upcoming chapters who he is...really. we learn about Alec too.and we must not forget Nina and Simon their roles pick up a bit too. So glad you enjoyed the maple. smokey barbcue chapter and took the time to post a review...Love it. though you do owe us a chapter to your story eh? LOL Yeppers Same Bat channel see ya. Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
As I was reading this I was thinking about this place here called King Ribs...LOL Thanks for sticking with the story, Conner and I promise you will find out about Heath. The story was written like an onion with layers but the real meat of who Heath and Alec really comes out in chapter 6 well more of who Alec is Heath gets his glory day a little in 5 but mostly 7 so I hope you hang with me. Kim -
Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
Hey KC *waves and kisses* Heath is who he is..LOL but I guess you'll have to wait and see who that person really is huh? So much happens from this point on. Don't blink you might miss something Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. You Rock!!!! Kim
