Naptowngirl

She stood quietly in the doorway observing the man she loved, the man who at this moment carried the weight of the world on his shoulders, completely broken, the man she loved since she was a young girl. She leaned against the wall remembering the first time she laid eyes on him. She was a freshman in high school… and he was a senior in college. It was at Lincoln Park on a warm July evening, at the Give Peace a Chance Rally. She smiled thinking back, his hair was longer then hers, and he wore

“What the FUCK was that!?” Mitch yelled jumping to his feet. He grabbed the railing that was preventing him from running on to the field. “That’s a Bull SHIT move!” He spat. Brye and Ryan stood to their feet as well, Brye, breathing anger while Ryan stood unable to move, his was a feeling, not of anger but one of fear. While Joel’s father and brother stood yelling profanity at the field of players and coaches, Ryan was in awe… silenced, his eyes focused on the field, focused on Joel who had n

The sounds of the birds chirping along with voices off in the distance caused Ryan to stir waking him from his deep slumber. He yawned, the taste of liquor and sleep laced his tongue. He pressed his head deeper into his pillow slowing combing his fingers through his hair; his attempt to reposition his body was met with resistance. A warm smile formed on his lips when he noticed Joel’s body draped on his own. He inhaled deeply, running the tips of his fingers through the waves of curls that

“Freeze!” shouted a deep, gruff voice. The boys froze in fright, dropping the can onto the floor. “Now, put your hands where I can see them.” The voice commanded. Ryan and Brye did as they were told. “Now, turn around.” They did so slowly and came face-to-face with a cop dressed in a black uniform, his badge glinting in the light, a gun pointed in their direction. “What are you two boys doing in here?” he asked. They didn’t speak. Fear had taken away their ability to. “I asked you a QUE

“Where the hell have you been Mister, do you know what time it is?” Brye interrogated Ryan as he walked through the door. Ryan laughed as Brye scooted out of bed making his way over to him, wearing nothing but a pair of soft gray drawstring shorts. Ryan slowly closed the door behind him and sighed. “Shouldn’t you be sleeping?” He asked side stepping his roommate who was looking at him as if he had two heads. “I could ask you the same thing.” Brye retorted trying to keep a straight fa

All I can say is WOW......this story had me from the door. I actually spent all day Saturday finishing it up. I have to agree with everyone one else, this has got to be one of the most gripping, loving come to terms with self I have read. I have read many stories here, and loved them all...but this one was....*sighs* Rick is mine and Ben's hero. that man rocks into forever. and Poor Ben I wanted to just take him and hide him from the rest of the world. Will, there are no words for him. I agree with Rick, He's a dead man. You captured everything in this story all while their relationship was developing right before their eyes. From the 2nd day of their meeting Rick knew Ben had issues and he wasn't leaving him. The sex was totally hot loved the humor in their conversations and loved that Ben finally found someone that would love him and he could love. The supporting characters were great too. I see you have several stories here, so will be checking them out. I told my friend about this and shes reading too... again such an entertaining read.

His heart was beating sporadically in his chest, so loud it was deafening. “Keep your eyes on me…” Joel’s words echoed in his mind as they undressed each other. “Keep your eyes on me Ryan.” Something that sounded so simple was almost impossible to do. Ryan knew if he were to look into Joel’s eyes he would see how frighten he was. This felt like a dream, as if he was floating…suspended in mid air. Faint labored moans escaped Ryan’s mouth with every lick...every flicker of Joel’s tongue agai

Ryan, Joel, and Brye stood out front of the AMC Rivers East Theater waiting for Emmett, his date and Olivia to arrive. Joel had purchased his, Ryan, Emmett, and Stephanie’s ticket, Emmett called saying they were running late, and he would pay Joel when he got there, while Brye got his and Olivia’s. The movie’s show time was 8:30pm it was already 8:10 and Brye was starting to worry. He paced up and down the sidewalk biting nervously on his thumbnail hoping his date would arrive soon. “He

It had been two weeks since the first game…the first party and the first kiss. Since that Hopeful night, things were very different for Ryan and Brye for that matter. They were the most popular freshmen on campus; Brye, for the obvious reason, he was the younger brother of number 21… Joel Masterson, the most valuable player for the Wildcats. For Ryan, it was as if he joined the, “Joel Lovers” fan club. Rumor had it that he and Joel did more than kiss when they went upstairs that night and bec

“Hey Ryan, hurry up man, Joel will be here in a minute, and I don’t want to hear his mouth about why we’re not ready.” Brye called out as he slipped on his shoes. “Okay…okay, I’m hurrying.” Ryan laughed; I’m just putting the finishing touches on my hair. Oh by the way I need to buy you some more styling gel, you’re almost out.” “Hey it’s cool, don’t worry about it, we’ll get some more later… now hurry up.” Byre stood up giving himself a once over in the mirror. He combed his fingers throug

To say the first week of school went over without a hitch would be an overstatement. Brye thought he had it all figured out and on the first day of classes he came to the sad realization that he didn’t, even after he and Ryan scouted the place out. He was late to most of his classes due to taking a wrong turn and ending up in the wrong building or on the other side of the campus. He prided himself for being on time to his calculus class only to find out that it didn’t start for another hour,

~*~*~*~ 2 Ryan returned to their dorm after having showered and changed, now fully dressed and ready for today’s activities. His dress; casual, wearing a pair of faded jeans and a navy, cotton button down shirt that he wore unbuttoned and un-tucked over a simple white tee, his hair styled, though slightly damp, only to find his roommate still very much asleep. Ryan woke up before the alarm went off; he was too excited to sleep. This was not a dream, this was his new reality. This would be

Chapter 1 School Daze Ten… eleven…. twelve… thir- four- fif- six-… Wait! Twenty… twenty-tw- twenty-ni- …oh forget it. Ryan sighed to himself and chuckled quietly. He had been looking out of the window, trying to count the passing trees as he and his parents drove along the road, but at the speed they were traveling he could not keep up. Now he had to think of something else to distract himself… something to help keep his mind off the nervousness he was feeling as they got nearer and near

Summary: Ryan Smith is away at college, experiencing life on his own for the first time. He meets Brye Masterson, his roommate and new found friend, who believes in living everyday to the fullest and having a good time… even if it means risking expulsion while doing so. They make a pact, their mission: Be the best students they can be… have lots of fun… and get laid before their winter break.

Thanks for the update...Love it Kit and Tom are sooooo cute. Can't wait for their date and I'm hoping we get to see Tay and Tom's talk about the birds and the bees...I miss Tay. great update.

Okay, I have to say that I love the start of this story..I can't wait to see where you go with them...Poor Seth I can't help but feel for him, living in his brother's shadow through no fault of their own. You're writing is such that I fall in love with him at the door. Then we have Spencer..Hummm the Spencer whose attention was captured by likes of Seth....So much to build from here. I'll be watching for updates to see how it all plays out. Hope Rl don't get in the way of our next update that I'm already sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for....

YAY!!!!! thank you so much...I really wanted to capture it all,so if you think I did a good job, I'm gonna run with it and not look back.. thank you again comments fuel the writer's soul.

Yeah, but what do you do...Nick could easly just let it go, but knowing him I don't think so.

Oh Yes, It's really sad.Poor Lisa, poor Nick, so much heart ache neither one was expecting to deal with this drama.

Thank you..Awww....I was hoping that it would read okay. It's been a few years since I wrote it. I hope I don't disappoint. It's my 1st time out so again thanks for posting a comment. I really appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Well there you have it boys and girls...another love connection. Kit got his first kiss and boyfriend all in one night...Not to shabby. Great chapter thanks...

YAY!!!!!! and I didn't have to wait 20yrs...you ROCK!!!!! I've missed this story... As I was reading this chapter I kept thinking how so much like his father Kit was. I could see Tay and his dad having such conversations where Tay was trying to pull back and Mitch wasn't having it. Not giving up so easily on something he knew he wanted. Tom *hugs* to him...He doesn't want to forget Miguel and he's afraid to love because of that. I totally get where he's coming from. If Kit is anythng like his dad I'm not to worried about them, Tom will come around I hope....

Well, don't blame us for wanting more...You shouldn't be so damn good at making us fall in love with your characters and stories...lol You write the stuff I want to read...I love, love and watching your characters fall without being aware is awesome..Your stories have just the "Oh My God" I'm not an angsty kind of girl unless the pay off is rewarded and so far your stories have been just my cup of tea..or glass of wine... what ever. Glad you're back!!!!

My kids and I just ran to Dairy Queen and when were walking back I looked down and we all had on flip flops.....lol I've seen those and they are really neat...I want to get my son a pair for school. My 14yr old daughter is a tennis shoe freak...she spends hundreds of dollars of baby sitting money on Air Maxes...Nike and 24/7s what ever that is...lol We go barefoot in the house my front door is full of shoes...

No, Conner, It's I that should be thanking you. My 1st story with lots of hick ups, but I will take your advice thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you think...you rock!!!