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Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Merci, Frosty -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Thank you so much KC, so happy you could make it and enjoyed yourself Kim -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
This review is PERFECTION....one word powerful! and I thank you. Kim -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
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Thanks, Toni, glad you had a good time...hehehe -
Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 19 Tonight I Celebrate..
your cake is served, my dear. Thanks for reading, RC -
The dusty evening sky provided the perfect canvas for this special occasion. Blazing shades of orange, along with magnificent hues of blue appeared as if an artist’s brush had just stroked watercolors across the horizon. The temperature; a calm seventy-three degrees. There was a slight breeze that carried on it the aroma of fresh-cut flowers and the promise of fall. “Wow,” Taggart whispered over his shoulder. He and Jimmy stood on the platform at the very back inconspicuous to everyone else.
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Hey, Toni, welcome to the party. So glad you're enjoying the story so are and by all means, sign up please. the more the better. Kim
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Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 15 I Do...Again
I think, Chris subconsciously remembers more than he thinks. I think with this chapter we did get to see them just being them, comfortable with each other. you'll have to read and see how it goes this time around and you should be receiving your wedding invite soon. Tag and Jimmy, I hope they are okay. Danke Nettie Poo MWAH! -
And the truth will set you free...We've only just begun and I see a fun ride in our future. Great chapter, KC. I guess I can't say, I can't wait till Monday eh? but this is a cool Sunday Treat!
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Yep, Chris just wasn't ready, though he wants to get his life back, David was right, he's got time there's no rush. David knows no other way to be, he just loves him and of course I had to end it there, you know me. you didn't just meet me yesterday
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Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 12 Thanks For the Memories...
Hahaha, Glad you couldn't stay away...I love it! House work is not my favorite either,so anything I can do to get out of it...lolI think deep down inside, Chris, knows how he feels about David, it is what it is...Tag is right, Chris has always loved David, he just doesn't remember it but his soul does. I enjoyed the BBQ as well, good friends, good food and great conversation. everyone made great points, something to take away with ya. Danke, chica, glad to see you're still enjoying the story and posting reviews, I love them, but you know that already. Kim -
Chapter 11 A Night On the Town...
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Nettie Poo, there is a very strong bond, a committment there, even though Chris doesn't remember it, it's still there.He is the jealous type which we find out and thats cool, he's not perfect. Yeah and I think the I'm not gay just flew out the window. He's totally gay. lol. Glad the date was a hit...I loved writing it. Hell I love this writing thang and comments from you and the like make it so worth it! Merci, Chica. Kim -
Chapter 10 The Closer I Get...
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That's right, girl, no double dipping please...lol Glad you got a chance to read this chapter, Nettie Poo, it was fun to write, I love including Ethan and Liam in the chapters and you're right Chris is amazing with them, they're his sons and he grew to love them rather quickly.The dinner party means a lot to David that Chris is even going, but it is important to Chris as well to support his husband. I've said before, everyone needs a Jimmy and Tag, they are amazing as well. Sorry about the damper, but you know how life is sometimes. It actually seems to distrub Chris when he found out about Charlotte which is a good thing. Danke, girly have a wonderful weekend, Love ya, Kim -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
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Stephen, I totally love, love your discription of Christian's mom so spot on, from the deep south, bible carrying and yes a martyr indeed. and I also like the clueless loser too. lol.I think however if she's going to be the way she is, then it's probably better that Ethan and Liam are not exposed to that. Jimmy is sadly right, Christian may never remember David as he once did. He still loves him none the less, but I feel for David, those things he treasured as you mentioned are lost and that is sad. Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Stephen and see ya at the wedding. Hope you enjoy it. Kim -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Haha, Lisa, you guessed who was coming to dinner, so to speak...lolAs I mentioned to Jammi, Chris is solid in his conviction and even thought he doesn't remember much about them, his family comes first. His mom is totally insane if she thinks he would give up his sons, they are his life always have been. I think, she thinks that giving them the money will help her sleep at night, but will it? A also agree she might be crazy as a road lizzard,but did did something right, because she raised an amazing son. See ya, at the wedding. Kim -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Thanks, Jammi, Christian's mom is indeed a piece of work, not to mention narrow minded, rainbow flags, smh..lol but yes they were both solid in their convictions. Christian deciated to his husband and family and Marcia to the church. I think it's great that Taggart and Jimmy are there for David as well, and yes everyone if being affected by the accident, Christian however has done an amazing job with protecting his sons, all this time, they've not been affected by their dad's memory loss from day one. And yep it's almost over, it's been a fun ride though, thanks for everything, chica, Kim -
Yeah, I figured you knew I was serious on the Misery threats so no need to repeat myself. But I will say the little bitch needs to get whats coming to her or I'll get the little pretty myself...just saying besides I got people... lol
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Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Haha, intune, I wont tell you, but you get to find out before anyone else does...Hehehe -
First off, totally great chapter. So glad to see this start to unfold. Amanda is a shrewd litttle Bitch...But she seems to be no match for Gibby. Love that he didn't back down, going toe to toe with the trashbag. Man I can't wait till they bring her down to her knees...just saying. Oh and love that Jonathan is so protective of his son. Gotta love that. You go Gibby
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Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
You are so right KC, that wasn't my intention, I promise. I was going to end the story with this chapter,but then as I started writing, I realized that Chris and his mother needed their time and I didn't want to rush it for two reasons. One they deserved their time and second the last chapter needed to be seperate. I didn't want too much going on in one chapter, sometimes when you do that some of the important stuff gets lost or missed. so my dear forgive me. Yes, you get two stars, no make that 3...lol you rock big time, my dear. As you mentioned Chris needed to stand up to his mother, and in the end she didn't agree or accept his life, but she does have a heart deep down, and selling the house and giving the money to her grandchildren was the right thing to do. Thanks for taking the time to read and post a review, I know you are busy churing out great chapters...now off to read...LOL Kim -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Love you too Krisz(in a totally non-internet-stalker appropriate way) Hehehe. See ya at the wedding. Christian and David have a seat reserved just for you. -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Hey Frosty, the mystery is solved...lol I actually felt that needed to happen in order for Chris to really move forward. Standing up to her and not shrinking back, like he said he is who he is, and he is a good person, so. Merci for the kind review. Macys is having a sale, just saying LOL -
Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 18 We've Only Just Begun...
Danke, RC, glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm sure Christian's mom had a heart somewhere in there. I'm sure Christian will uphold her wishes re the house. Monkey wrench in the wedding eh? Well I guess you just have to be there, Oh and yes, you've been patient...remember I got ya and I think you'll like it. :D it's my next project. -
Chapter 9 Is It All Just A Dream...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 9 Is It All Just A Dream...
It all comes together. I mentioned that we would learn of Christian's past as he did. Yeah that was hard on them both, but they made it through it, which is why David is so determined, why he loves Christian so much. And you're right he had every reason to freak out when Chris left, the last time he did that he cut David completely out of his life. They both carried with them a heavy burden.One cannot deny there seems to be an unbreakable bond between them. Chris and his mom, stay tuned. Merci, Chica -
Chapter 8 A Road Once Traveled...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 8 A Road Once Traveled...
Thank you, my dear Nettie Poo. Yeah, Christian had hoped for better from his mother, but the way she and his father thought, that would have been too good to be true. Christian had it hard, coming out indeed and there's more to come and the ways paved aren't always easy. Danke, sweetie, so glad you're still enjoying the story.
