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    To me a delay is just another form of cliffhanger ....oh, right!!!! YOU never use CLIFFHANGERS...
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    Up And Away

    Swhouston44 commented on Swhouston44's story chapter in Up And Away

    Thanks for your review and if someone's hand doesn't hurry up.....I have rewritten the darne thing 4 times, and had two different characters try to narrate it. I am satisfied now, just trying to end it.....It's beginning to feel like a Monty Python Sketch..... Actually i am merely trying to create a seamless tie in to the next chapter.... RC RC
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    Thanks Jo ann for reading and reviewing my story. A lot of the names, like Goodnight and Oarka are real, and Utopia. Lubek exists in Germany, and Barney Fife, well....only in Mayberry. RC
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    School dazed

    Swhouston44 commented on Swhouston44's story chapter in School dazed

    Thank you Jo ann. Happy you like the story.
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    Yeah! Write faster! Looks like I'm getting a new favorite story.
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    I just thought of something...Which Father knew best?
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    Chapter 1

    Swhouston44 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Kim dear, That was the sweetest mostt wonderful story I have ever read...And I liked seein my name up there in lights and all.....Aw Shucks!!!! But really, I thank you more than you will ever know for my Caleb booster. Oh, but one other thing......so um.. where is my key? RC
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    Maybe the paving crew is led by Bridget, she intends to blow up Trevor and company, but we see from all those preceding chapters how successful she's been, and then there is her trusted and adoring fan club in Cali...... need I say more. Or then again, maybe its CJ and his good intention to end this never ending saga of a certain Circumnavigation....... Or possibly it is CJ and all those non-existent Cliffhangers
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    Chapter 42

    Swhouston44 commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 42

    Amazing, just .....AMAZING. I think that was my favorite chapter of all your stories. Getting Gussied Up and Letting Go......WOW!
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    Chapter 19

    Swhouston44 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 19

    Won't try to second guess you..my last try was way off mark. Good work. RC
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    Hey, How many chapters are left....8,7,6...late last year i remember him writing there were 9 chapters left, and would end shortly. Early this year he said there were 9 chapters and it would wrapup early this spring, then delays and he said before spring was over. I'm begining to think CJ might not be too trustworthy. Also, My butt is sore from being on pins and needles for over 2 years now.....
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    Up And Away

    Swhouston44 commented on Swhouston44's story chapter in Up And Away

    Hi and thank you right now for this review... You made my day. Right after he denies kissing Travis, cole has a come to Jebus moment as he remembers his lips against Travis'....Next chapter mon petite chou (I think that means my precioussssss), will be delayed...i barely have 400 words written. When i originally wrote this, aall the action occurred in the 2nd chapter....We changed all of that. But, when I began the task of rewriting I had to write a new chapter 3, 4, an 5 to explain things. Anyway, thanks for reading and Kim, sweetie pie...deliver the goods!!!!!!
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    great ending. Now I just have one question, in sevral parts.....Was Christian wearing a hard hat when he had his accident.... Is he hiding an affair, or a murder, or...? Guess we'll never know will we? Hmph!!! You finished your pretty story, now hand it over Kim....... RC
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    Up And Away

    Swhouston44 commented on Swhouston44's story chapter in Up And Away

    Thanks for the review Lisa, Cole's name is Wayne Cole Francis, I included this in my uneditted chapter 2. I willl in clude this information in an upcoming chapter. Texas is a community property state and there is no alimony. I believe judges in this state more often than not defer to the mother when awarding custody. Every divorced father I know gets Wednesdays and every other weekend with their children. RC
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    Lisa,I have enjoyed reading your reviews, and the replies to Naptowngirl's stories. Happy to see you reading and reviewing my story. Cole . has his reasons for keeping his distance from Travis...patience please. Answers will be forthcoming.
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    I am not long or tall, but I'm a Texan. Maybe I was paying too close attention to the Olympics, or something on BBC America when I was writing. Sorry for the confusion. Your questions about cole at the picnic get answered in a future chapter. Thanks for giving my story your attention. RC
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    If I never see that bitch again it will be too soon. Five days ago the academy held the graduation ceremony. Three days ago I turned 18 and left that horror of a place, and all that bigoted hate-filled bullshit cloaked in the hellfire religion. Six years of whippings and punishment for something I have no control over, completed, caput, finito! My grandmother, Isabella and my stepmother Sara met me at the airport. Both greeted me with exuberant hugs and kisses. “Ya know we’re gonna be e
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    Couldn't bust a grape, Kim? Great line. So where the hell is my piece of cake?
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    Chapter 17

    Swhouston44 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 17

    The B isn't going to make another sting is she? Thank the fates for screwups so i get to read this early. Will just have to wait over a week now until you give us more. Thanks RC
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    Chapter 13

    Swhouston44 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 13

    So. Gibby got a haunted hardon? Great story...Can't wait to see Amanda twist on a rope or something!
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    Chapter 12

    Swhouston44 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 12

    Bad guessing on my part. So mad about Amanda offing Tanner...I forgive ya tho.... But Ghost Cooties....INDEED! Great story
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    Chapter 1

    Swhouston44 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    Really enjoyed the 1st chapter. I rarely comment on a first chapter, but watch out for me from now on..... rc
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    Excellent chapter. We finally get to meet Christian's mother, the house money for the grandkids sort of redeemed her. Great writing... I guess we're all gonna be going to the chapel unless ya throw a monkey wrench in the works!!!! I'm still waiting, albeit non too patiently for my Kaleb...... RC
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    I'm just saying I read somebody's 15 chapter high school ghost story last night(KC) and used up all my quota of Likes...... This is excellent. I liked the bed wetting monster, and Act Right in the Manbag....funny. Going to the chapel.....they're gonna get married!!! RIGHT!!??
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    Chapter 11

    Swhouston44 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 11

    Just going to say great story. Keep it up and you best start reviving Tanner so there can be some end of story really hot Ess EE EX.
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