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AleMaho

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  1. Nephylim's Dangerous Liaisons! =))
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    Chapter 3

    After lunch at my house I rushed into the shower. Christopher had told me as soon as I could. I wouldn’t want to waste any minute then. I grabbed my books and left my mom a message with our cleaning lady. When I made it to Christopher’s I was surprised to see his father was coming out. “Hi Mr. Robin,” I greeted him. “Hello Josiah,” he said to me hastily. “How’s work?” “Wouldn’t know. I am running late!” he said laughing. “Well, good luck sir,” “Thanks. Christopher’s on his
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    Chapter 2

    The next day couldn’t have gone any slower. Each class felt like a never-ending nightmare. It seemed like teachers had gone wild and decided that they ought to assign extended class works. I hated the fact that I hardly managed to finish them. The pile of books I would take for homework’s purposes would definitely be tall. “You didn’t call me yesterday,” whispered Danielle. “Sorry. Long story,” I whispered back though my eyes were focused on my work. “Can’t wait to here!” I wasn’t pl
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    Autumn Leaves

    Why, thank you! =)
  5. Lol. Thanks, i guess! =)
  6. Lol. Well, long time ago, i decided to change my msn name, just for a change. So i came up with a list of names. I didn't like any of them. I ended up playing videogames that day. One of the character's name was Rowan. And there was a place called Mahogany town. So, i decided to switch the 'a' for an 'e' And so Rowen Mahogany was built. So i changed my msn screen name to it. In the next days, everyone was calling me Rowen! lol (To this very date, one of my closest friends still do) I decided to not only use it as a screen name, but also as a pen-name. Eventually, Rowen Mahogany started appearing on forum's and the like. But i usually get bore... So i got bored, and within a year, i had created another screen name. (And within a year after this one, i created yet another one!! But that's another matter!) Relocated to other forums and all that. But i decided that it was going to be my pen-name, even if it weren't my screen name anymore. Days passed by and i decided to let my thoughts finally on paper, and began working on my unpublished novel. And i needed a name. So i name the main character Rowen, cus it fit him perfectly. But i couldn't fit a last name. It had to be Mahogany. I had gotten so used to it. Everyone had! So, Rowen Mahogany (the character) was built. And then it got me thinking, i just couldn't have the same pen-name as the main character. It just wouldn't fit. So i decided to use my name, Alejandro. And to keep the other, Mahogany. Cuz there is something about it...(perhaps about the wood) that i like! But given the fact that Alejandro Mahogany is pretty long itself, i had to short it up a bit. And so, da dam, AleMaho was built! And that's it. A bit ridiculous, but it happened. So, lol i guess!
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    Autumn Leaves

    I sit, staring through the window. The backyard seems so empty. So peaceful. So quiet. And though invisible, I know the wind blows by. The tree’s hair is now dusk gold. October seems forever lasting. My pain feels forever going. My heart is forever broken. My eyes shall never see your smile again. Our hands shall never touch again. Your voice shall never be heard again. Forever lost. Forever remembered. I miss our fights. I miss our games. I miss you, dear; I miss
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    Autumn Leaves

    A poem, I strongly think, suits and grasps the way I feel when September starts ending and October sun starts rising.
  9. It's my pen-name. As simple as that. Although, were it really comes from, well, that's a bit of a story!!
  10. You are the shit! And I'm f**king serious! This story made me smile, frown, laugh and cry. It's an amazing one. And the way you portray the characters. They are so vivid. The whole thing, it felt like i was actually reading a true person's circumstances. It got me so caught up in it! The ending was a bit predictible, but suitable nonetheless. Terrific job, well done!!
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    Catara

    I love the dream. It's really unique. Now i'm off to the next chapter. The whole stroy seems promising!
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    Dandelion

    It felt like a long poem. At least i read it like one. Very interesting! And i did like very much the ending!
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    Chapter 1

    I love how it is written in present tense. It gives so much more to the whole thing. Third story today, and i just keep losing it with the endings. I thought this one was going to have a different ending. Nice story, nonetheless.
  14. I have! Not that i enjoy it, or the like, but it is passable!
  15. Cancer, as in July! )
  16. As in solo artists: Definitely LadyGaga and TaylorSwift. As in bands: AngelsAndAirwaves, hands down. Their vocalist TomDeLonge is just amazing.
  17. My Sister's Keeper. It made me cry =((
  18. Sweet dream As for me, I was devoured and swallowed by a crocodile...and somehow, i was still conscious. That's probably the weirdest dream I've ever dreamed.
  19. Reminded me of exactly the opposite. Usually, i never get called by my friends on Christmas. But this Christmas was different. I got some texts and quite a few calls. They definitely lit up my night, which was pretty much the same as past Christmas, but it was ok nontheless. I have no complains about this one whatsoever. I am one of those few people in the world who forget about Christmas true meaning or whatever it is called. I enjoy the night and put my own meaning to it!
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    Mike and Winston

    Great story you have there. A few dislikes, such as the constant abrupt-shifts of scenery. Also, the last chapters seemed liked a whole stroy itself, rather than part of the main plot. Overall, i loved the whole concept and the twist almost at the end. I must say i was epxpecting another kind of ending. But hey, it was a good ride, though!
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    Story

    Cool story. I really enjoyed it. The whole concept, about one day was what really caught my attention. Because of that, i found the interval of a month-passing-by discouraging. And in the end, i don't know, i feel like it ends abruptly - though the last few lines are very clever. In fact, there are many clever lines in the story. Good job!
  22. AleMaho

    Preface

    Am I supposed to just stare? Is it fair? I see many couples every day. Holding hands, hugging, kissing... why can't I have that? I know I never will. Why am I so miserable? Somehow, I think I made something in my past life; maybe karma is a bitch. Most of the time I feel lonely. Sure, I have friends, but they do not fill that void. That void that can only be filled by that other; the one that complements you... the one they call soul mate. I sat in my classroom, staring at him as always.
  23. I was an average teen. He was an average teen. The moment I set eyes on him, I knew it. But life works in mysterious ways. I never thought my life could change for the better. I never thought I could change someone's life...for the better.
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    Chapter 1

    “How much you got?” “Seventeen,” he said. “Oh! Well that’s a pretty good grade anyway,” I said cheerfully. He shyly smiled back and nodded while putting his test sheet inside his bag. I stared at his movements. His face showed no expression whatsoever. It seemed indifferent, as if that grade was not what he had expected. That was the only time I talked to him that day during school. The rest of it, I spend it staring at him and looking away every time my stare became suspicious. “S
  25. I'm not fond of cats, but the two cats in the cups are cute!! :3
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