Acedias

Haha! Guessing at my plot ... you know how I hate it when people are close the right track. Means I have to change my story again ... I don't think Penelope Herrington is gonna be pleased re Blake/Haze though ... that is a given. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Afraid I'd quit? No! Surely not. Not when things are finally starting to happen! You've described nicely what I think makes a good couple, where thy're better as a pair than apart. Course they only just started trusting each other and that trust hasn't been tested. Yet Maybe soon but. Anyway, thanks heaps for your review!

True true Rosicky ... I don't think you can shake it out of anyone, its gotta come from within and as you say only when they're in a safe place. And also if my characters werent so insecure they'd have got further by now and I'd have less of a story! Thanks for the review.

I'm glad you feel sorry for Haze ... cause you're meant to! Although some readers seem to think he's a bit of a jerk ... hmmm maybe I need to work on explaining more how he got that way. I think you are on the right track with the source of his issues but ... Thanks for the review!

Yeah I think I will go easy on Blake for a bit. He deserves 'some' happiness as you say. Lets make some at least a chapter hey?

Awww ... now u got me all embarrassed. Thanks Checkmate, you say such nice things, I am glad you like. While I will try to get another chapter out soon I wont rush ... I tend to be a bit of a perfectionist and take forever!

Yeah I think it's funny how sometimes you have to let something go to make it come. Blake had enough and let go long enough to get thru. Don't think he could've succeeded if he'd been trying ... The anxiety woulda got in the way. At least thtat was what I was trying to make out. Having won but he's back to nerves again. So now how's he gonna go? Still maybe they can draw on the promise to trust and see where that takes em ... I'll try not to take so long next time!

Everyday is overly optimistic ... They take a while to write ya know! Yeah I'm getting to explaining Haze ... Finally! He can come across like a bit of a dick, but hopefully when Blake and the reader get past that prickly exterior .... Maybe you will end up finding Haze more attractive

Haha research ... Yeah, no research required ... Came from the top of my head which says something about me hey LOL ... Glad u enjoyed thanks for the review

Wow ... U really write amazing reviews Adiel ... I'm somewhere between chuffed and totally embarrassed ... I mean I don't know what a cornhusker is but Eric bana undressed is great use of imagery to underscore your point. I'm glad u liked the emotional roller coaster again ... It did tend to go up and down a lot this time hey? I was tempted to stay on the downward trend for a few chapters but after the last couple of months I needed to write something happier for my own sake. So I decided to quickly pull Blake up again this time. And to keep it there I decided the next chapter would be more pleasant too. Fluffier I think or at least that's what I'm thinking one. But yeah u r right, heaps more to explain about Haze ... Coming soon! Thanks again for your awesome review!

Hey there b glad you liked ... Enough to have u rambling even huh? yeah haze is still a mystery, but more to be revealed when they hang out tomorrow no doubt. Thanks for the review!

Thank u charlieocho .... I'll try not to keep u waiting as long this time! Thanks for the review.

U like the way the story is progressing ie really slowly huh?I'll have to post my next update in December Haha ... Naah I know wot u mean thanks for the review!

Haha I do that with stories I read too! good to have a decent bit to read ... Also helps you to mitigate those nasty cliffhangers authors leave you in huh? Hope u enjoy the next two

never had a video review before I gotta admit!

If Blake had been able to see all of the houses in Kulibari Bay at once, in some sort of police line-up, he felt certain he could have guessed this one belonged to Mrs Herrington. Standing in front of the place now, it seemed obvious to him, with its huge second floor balcony overlooking the bay, its wall-to-floor windows, and its spacious lawns and gardens. Whereas every other house in town seemed to be made of fibro, this one was at least partially concrete, the first story rendered and pai

Haha ... awww ... I can't say no to that face! Not long now. Am working on it!

Hello there and thank you for the review! I am sorry about how long it's taking to get the next chapter out ... I got sick for ages then had troubles with work have found it difficult to get back into where I was with this tale ... I wrote some more last night though so it's still a work in progress. Check back soon!

Hello! Sorry pretty late with next chapter ... Been crazy busy. It will come but!

Awww thank you! I must admit I've been struggling lately to write on account of being sick for ages and work commitments ... I sat down to force myself a few times but it doesn't come out well - it's better when I get lost in the joy of it u r right! But there is definitely more quirky awkwardness heading your way soon. Thanks again for the review

Hey there thanks for the review Its great to have someone that actually prefers my slow style and encourages me not to go too fast (like that could ever happen!) ... Yeah I think Haze is gonna have to start talking in this next chapter ... I feel while the building and mystery keeps people interested, its come time for Haze to tell his story (well just a bit of it at least!). Have to admit I am way behind on the next chapter sorry Been sick and works been crazy so yeah ... but stay tuned, the work is definitely in progress.

Awww .. shucks ... thanks for your kind words fraid the next chapter has been delayed ... got the flu and lost a couple of weeks of good writing time! But its in progress ... thanks for reviewing!

Hey man thanks for writing me a review Glad I have you hooked! Yeah I know I have some explaining to do huh ... and since I only have one point of view and I made that point of view psychologically warped eyes to look through its kinda hard to guess what's going on. Rest assured I have a plan. Of sorts. Roughly. Maybe. *cough* Everything will make sense in the end

Hello again Sam! Yeah Haze is still a mystery huh. I think I am gonna have to do something about that in my own way (ie slowly lol) ... glad u r still hooked and thanks heaps for the review

You know it's funny ... U r not the first person to say this was your fav chapter and yet when I wrote it I was super worried it would be boring! (i cut a lot out which is why it was so short too) No dialogue, limited ability to interact, heaps of diving jargon and explanation of that jargon. I luv scuba so yeah it was ard to measure how much was too much ... Im glad u thort it was just right I have some of my diving photos on my profile page if u have not already seen them ... Maybe they can give u more encouragement ... U don't need to be on a reef to learn ... Neway thank u very much for your thorts and compliments ... They r much appreciated