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Hey Nephylim Glad you liked Can't answer your question. U will have to wait and see hehe ... gonna answer it in the next chapter (maybe). More soon!
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Thanks RC glad you liked it!
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Its up its posted! Sorry it took so long. But um ... yeah ... its still a bit of a cliffhanger. Thanks for reviewing!
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For the longest moment all Blake could hear was a seemingly ubiquitous high pitching ringing in his ears. He could see Nats and Jill speaking urgently to one of the Italian girls, he could even tell that they were shouting from the looks on their faces, but he couldn’t seem to make sense of their words. They were standing right in front of him, but he got the impression they were somehow far away. It was as if his brain had shut down. He hadn’t managed to grasp anything that’d happened since he’
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I know! Honestly I feel bad, I usually post ever 10-14 days, but my easter was crazy and I've been sick and had all this other stuff going on. I have written the next chapter so don't worry, you won't be hanging off the cliff for much longer i swear ...well not from this cliffhanger anyway
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Wow ... you powered through all 100k words in like 5 hours. I would be lucky to produce a few thousand words in 5 hours. Now what are you gonna do? Yeah only one kiss in that many words ... sorry, I guess the story isn't gonna hold the interest of those who wanna see action quicker. And now you are at another cliffie too! I usually post every two weeks, but a lot has been going on in my life so am a bit behind this time. Have finished writing chapter 17 but I still have to work on it, edit it before its posted. Check back soon though! (Oh and its another cliffie ending too so ... yeah ...)
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Yay! Pretty disastrous night huh? But you knew that from your last review. Stuff's been disclosed so the morning is gonna be tough eh? You still reading, you are gonna catch up to me real soon.
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Jealousy is always a good plot mover hey No one likes Derrick ... sheez he wasnt meant to be hated or anything ... I dunno what I did to put everyone off. LOL ... yeah disaster is coming though hey
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Yeah who uses a swear word for a title? But it was the best title I could think of so I stuck with it Pretty intense day huh!
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Good to hear! Cause a lot more teasing coming your way LOL glad you liked the cliffie ... lucky you could just go to the next chapter as I am sure you will ... you seem to be unstoppable.
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I dunno I was meaning to write entirely from Blake's point of view. He makes assumptions about what is happening but its all his (rather flawed and skewed) view. Maybe you can say that Haze got him on and off the drugs, but really? Haze didn't know anything about them. Blake did it all by himself and projects events outwards onto others. Blake doesnt always get it right!
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Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
Thanks! I do worry that my pace is a little slow, so glad you like it. Yeah the drugs start, but they make it difficult to write so they cant hang around too long! -
Chapter 9: Sun and Conversation
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 9: Sun and Conversation
Yeah mushy but bonding again ... its all about the bonding. Sheez you've been reading for 4 hours now, you are a machine. Save some of my story for later! -
You should! Diving is cool! I have some photos on my profile to inspire you if you wanna look. And I have definitely come across some hotties too ... only straights so far though yeah you are halfway already ... man you read crazy fast.
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Different 'states' is the word I like to use. More on that later. But yeah its all about the bonding. Hey
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MMMMMmmmm anti-anxiety medication is yummy. At least at first. Then it sucks balls. I guess Penelope is shaping up to be a villain.
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Guess all bonding involves some level of vulnerability and disclosure huh. Blake just didn't get the choice - but that worked out better maybe? (Glad you are hooked!)
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Distractions can work sometimes, but sometimes they can be more of a problem in their own right. I think a range of coping mechanisms is best Glad you are sticking with this, you are burning through my chapters.
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Chapter 3: Emotion Number Two
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 3: Emotion Number Two
What self respecting gay boys don't hate that word in respect of a good looking dude Looks like you can see where this story is headed already! -
Yup, gotta introduce the love interest pretty quick or else people will get impatient. Course my story goes pretty slowly from there. Bang - they meet, but that's as far as the word 'bang' can apply ...
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Chapter 1: Life is Going to be Different
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 1: Life is Going to be Different
Uh-oh ... you aren't gonna like where its up to either LOL ... Glad you starting reading but! And that you like my writing style. A few people have told me its easy to read ... I am choosing to take that as a compliment ... I mean Spot the Dog is easy to read too, but I am not making that comparison. -
Man even I haven't read it in one setting ... I can even remember what happened back at the start(whispers: ps does it make sense?) ... anyway, what a time to join hey, you woulda come across the other cliffhangers and thought: phew at least the story isnt ending here ... only to get the worse one ... i think maybe. Anyway, really glad you like my story and thanks for reviewing.
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You should stay in WA sometime and check it out - pretty places all up the coast. Course the best side of the country is definitely my side I will get you a chapter soon of course ... yeah ... just as soon as i imagine a way out for Haze ...
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Ooooo a new reviewer .... What a time to join, right at the cliffhanger stage hey. Don't die! You won't find out what happens! Thanks for reviewing
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Was wondering when you'd get around to reading 15 wonder what u will make of 16 ... Has some big maybes in it
