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I dunno I was meaning to write entirely from Blake's point of view. He makes assumptions about what is happening but its all his (rather flawed and skewed) view. Maybe you can say that Haze got him on and off the drugs, but really? Haze didn't know anything about them. Blake did it all by himself and projects events outwards onto others. Blake doesnt always get it right!
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Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 10: From Bad to Nothing
Thanks! I do worry that my pace is a little slow, so glad you like it. Yeah the drugs start, but they make it difficult to write so they cant hang around too long! -
Chapter 9: Sun and Conversation
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 9: Sun and Conversation
Yeah mushy but bonding again ... its all about the bonding. Sheez you've been reading for 4 hours now, you are a machine. Save some of my story for later! -
You should! Diving is cool! I have some photos on my profile to inspire you if you wanna look. And I have definitely come across some hotties too ... only straights so far though yeah you are halfway already ... man you read crazy fast.
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Different 'states' is the word I like to use. More on that later. But yeah its all about the bonding. Hey
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MMMMMmmmm anti-anxiety medication is yummy. At least at first. Then it sucks balls. I guess Penelope is shaping up to be a villain.
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Guess all bonding involves some level of vulnerability and disclosure huh. Blake just didn't get the choice - but that worked out better maybe? (Glad you are hooked!)
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Distractions can work sometimes, but sometimes they can be more of a problem in their own right. I think a range of coping mechanisms is best Glad you are sticking with this, you are burning through my chapters.
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Chapter 3: Emotion Number Two
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 3: Emotion Number Two
What self respecting gay boys don't hate that word in respect of a good looking dude Looks like you can see where this story is headed already! -
Yup, gotta introduce the love interest pretty quick or else people will get impatient. Course my story goes pretty slowly from there. Bang - they meet, but that's as far as the word 'bang' can apply ...
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Chapter 1: Life is Going to be Different
Acedias commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 1: Life is Going to be Different
Uh-oh ... you aren't gonna like where its up to either LOL ... Glad you starting reading but! And that you like my writing style. A few people have told me its easy to read ... I am choosing to take that as a compliment ... I mean Spot the Dog is easy to read too, but I am not making that comparison. -
Thanks Bee Glad you are enjoying it! Its set in your home State too!
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Man even I haven't read it in one setting ... I can even remember what happened back at the start(whispers: ps does it make sense?) ... anyway, what a time to join hey, you woulda come across the other cliffhangers and thought: phew at least the story isnt ending here ... only to get the worse one ... i think maybe. Anyway, really glad you like my story and thanks for reviewing.
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You should stay in WA sometime and check it out - pretty places all up the coast. Course the best side of the country is definitely my side I will get you a chapter soon of course ... yeah ... just as soon as i imagine a way out for Haze ...
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Ooooo a new reviewer .... What a time to join, right at the cliffhanger stage hey. Don't die! You won't find out what happens! Thanks for reviewing
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Was wondering when you'd get around to reading 15 wonder what u will make of 16 ... Has some big maybes in it
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Bwaahahahaa ha ha ... Ah... I love it
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Oh come on 10,000 words in 10 days is fast ... I dunno if I can write any quicker man ... Takes time to get stuff right. You have to write then rewrite and then before I post I send it to my iPad to read as if I'm a reader and it's funny how you get a different view that way and then I usually spend one more evening rewriting after that. This time took longer cause I wanted to get the kiss right but yeah as you've noted blakes outward looking compassion is a cure for inward looking insanity and vice versa ... I think that's where I'm going with this maybe sorry about the cliff hanger ... I can't help but chuckle a bit at my own evil though hehehe
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Like all writing I base it off my life huh ... That's all anyone can ever do glad u found it engaging and suspenseful ... Wait till I write the rescue! Lol
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Haha ... It does seem to take around 10. Funny I had lots of extra time cause I was sick but still ended up taking 11 days huh? I wrote 9000 words in the first 7 days then spent the last three on that kiss scene. Rewrote it so many times i reckon it took longer than the rest combined. Easter long weekend and Anzac day here in OZ so hopefully more time to write. Stay tuned!
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Yeah sorry it was a bit heavy and depressing huh? Even by my standards! But off set surely by the kiss huh? Finally got that ball rolling. Can't comment on your other musings ... U will have to wait and see. Sorry if it made u depressed but surely u knew what to expect from me and a chapter titled lost! More soon!
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Ah the cliff hanger huh? Yeah it's a bit evil ... But that's how I roll can't produce chapter 17 I only have a rough outline. Still 3 public holidays this fri mon and tues in OZ so extra writing time! Stay tuned
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Thanks Nephylim! Yeah that kiss hey ... Took me ages to write that scene. And afterwards I just couldn't stop tinkering with it! First bit of action between the boys in 100,000 words I wanted it to be good. Glad u liked! I'm writing as quick as I can!
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Well he's gonna need to be rescued me thinks ... But by whom I wonder ...?
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Hello! I have posted another chapter to my story: Chapter 16 Lost ... cause ...well you'll have to read to get the title. Story Link Hope you enjoy! More soon ...
