James Hiwatari
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Wow, thanks for writing so many reviews! It was a great morale boost to mark the return from a long hiatus... Well, for Oscar's father "playing the girl's role" (being seduced) is worse than than the others, after all "guys are supposed to want to have sex" and all that. If Oscar had been "mentally" the "top", he would've been angry because of the broken rules and suspension on about an equal footing with it being sex with a guy. Which only goes to show that yes, the guy is twisted. :S
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WARNING: Attempt rape and an evil paedophile roaming around. The bastard cared so much about his new boy-toy he waited until the dress rehearsal to tell the kid about the sex maniac that sang at our Christmas Concerts every year. Why I had to sit and listen to their pathetic conversation was a mystery the bastard did not want solved any time soon. It may have something to do with the pleasure of seeing the kid get extremely jumpy and fidgety. Though it was usually my pleasure only. At least I d
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Thanks for the review! I can't say much more than "Siggi won't like it" about next chapter. You know, suspense and all that. But yeah, Dmitri only wants what is best for Gunni. Or at least what Gunni thinks is best for himself. He's just that nice. Or something.
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Why would he keep it in his pants, anyway? What is the point? Well, at least he's honest about things. And Gunni is, well, almost 17. Almost an adult! Btw, Dmitri's next fuck might as well be a biological necessity. I won't go as far as say "life and death matter", but he probably thinks it's pretty close. Oh, Gunni, what have you done!
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Hey, thanks for the review!Yeah, you can say anything about Dmitri, but at least he's honest. He likes sex and is not ashamed of it. As for what he and Gunni will get up to... you'll find out soon enough(ish).
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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! Siggi is not the nicest person around, and he does hate Gunni... At least the "kid" is growing some backbone now. Though that means Siggi might want to test exactly how much he can take...
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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! Siggi is not the nicest person around, and he does hate Gunni... At least the "kid" is growing some backbone now. Though that means Siggi might want to test exactly how much he can take...
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As the first week of the ‘study group’ came to a close I realised I was spending more time with Olivia’s family than with mine. Every day I arrived home after dinner and left straight after breakfast; there was just enough time to tell my parents the group was going well and I was still confident in my ability to pass all exams. I was out of the house before they could ask any further questions. After I spent my second weekend in a row at the Viñas’s, I realised their place was becoming as famil
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“Anyway, I’ve been spending so much time with you and kissing you and hugging you that I think I got addicted to it. I have a crush on you. And I want to be your boyfriend. Do you want to go out with me and make all the stuff we have already been doing official?” The scene was like this: Gunni was on my lap, lying quietly and cutely like an overgrown baby. We were sitting on a log passing for a bench outside the restaurant. My hand touched his messy bangs, more because I liked to touch them tha
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Well, Dmitri has his heart in the right place (insert joke about his penis)... There will be more details about how their relationship came to be in the next chapter. I don't know how that extra information will affect your opinion about Dmitri, but for now I'm very entertained by the very similar reactions everyone seems to be having about it. Thanks for the review!
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Dmitri would definitely not be happy with just one person. You got that right... But what makes you think Gunni won't like it? Thanks for the review!
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“People, people, we have an announcement!” The bastard and the kid came back after almost half an hour. They missed all the food, but the bastard’s stupid half-moon smile showed he was not at all bothered. The kid was the reddest I had ever seen him, though. At least it was entertaining. “Oh, what happened? Why did you take so long? We were considering sending an expedition to check on you!” Yes, but only after Karen was through with her stupid paedophilic sexual fantasies. “Oh, you didn’t n
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There was much laughing with your review. "Tonsil hockey" is now an everyday expression between me and my partner. In about two chapters I will be in a better position to comment about Dmitri and Gunni, bur for now I'll just sit back and enjoy the comments. And then wonder about your reactions. Jó has a straight brother, but he is married and with a 5 year-old daughter. I think you have more chance with the clone option.
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Yeah, that's pretty much it. Siggi is not really in his best mind at the moment. The basic rule for who is writing which chapter is this: Gunni does odd numbers, Siggi does even ones. Chapter 10 is a "guest chapter" by Jó. Thanks for the review!
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Aw, you have such a low opinion of Dmitri... ;P Though that's pretty much what Gunni is thinking. Thanks for the review! I wonder what you will think of the next chapter...
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“Have fun, Gunni, and call when you want me to pick you up!” Eiri called as he dropped me off at the restaurant where the ISO’s Christmas party was taking place. It was a small house a little further from the city centre, with brightly coloured walls and a warm, cosy interior. There didn’t seem to be any chairs, only comfortable-looking couches for people to sit and enjoy their meals. The music in the background was Tchaikovsky’s Pathetic, something I wasn’t expecting to hear in a place like thi
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“Siggi, your bath is ready.” Four weeks of hell and no indication it would end soon. The bastard tried not to look like he thought I was a piece of glass about to be broken into thousands of pieces as he helped me sit, but as usual he failed miserably. “Tell me when I can get out. If you take too long I’ll die of boredom.” “As you wish, my lord.” The bastard put on that stupid grin of his and bowed. “Anything else you want?” “Yes. Your dick up my ass again.” “That’s not happening for a whi
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You make me imagine Gunni as some kind of pure unicorn of innocence. It's true that he's still very naive and innocent in many ways. You're not the only one feeling protective. And if I say anything else I risk spoiling the suspense for the next couple of chapter, so I'll shut up now. Thanks for the review, though. I really like to hear what you think about the story.
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Arnar's relationship with Siggi will be explored more later. Siggi has lots of issues he needs to work on. He's very determined and stubborn. Sadly it meant nobody could stop his self-destruction. Maybe now he'll get some help to deal with everything. Arnar will have to be there for him, and so will Dmitri. At least we hope. :S
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Thank you! I like writing this kind of scene, I'm glad it came out well.
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Gunni's mother is another awesome person. She's inspired in my mum, so I can attest that people like her exist. If it wasn't for her, Eiri's life would be very different now, and not in a good way. :S
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The furry psychopath is only funny until it comes for you. This was one of my favourite chapters to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it too! Isaac is originally from my very first story. He's a very nice guy, I had to put him in when I realised he was so similar to Gunni in many ways. There's plenty of room for a great friendship to blossom there. Siggi is not necessarily jealous. He's angry more than anything - his problem with Gunni will become clearer later on. And Jó is awesome. I'm totally fanboying over him. (Maybe I shouldn't, for being the author and everything, but whatever)
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I'm glad you're liking the story so much. Nothing can be dull when Dmitri's around. It's like... plot rule number 1.
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Margrét loves her son, but unfortunately that love is based on her own idealised image of Eiri. Until that idealisation stays there, she won't notice anything, or trick herself into not noting anything. Thanks for the review!
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Siggi is the probably the last person who would care about his own hypocrisy. It's possible that he thinks he has the right to be an arsehole to others because everyone is an ass to him (at least on his own perception of reality). Thanks for the review! (And yeah, you have to wait a bit to see that dinner...)
