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  1. All your comments make me so happy
  2. I'm glad you like Lucca, to me he's sort of the unapproachable type, so I wasn't sure how people would respond to him. Thank you for the comment
  3. Thanks And it is possible.. if they can make things work out.
  4. Nooo, but don't expect that to happen. They both skirt too much around issues.
  5. Thanks so much for giving this story a read, I'm glad your enjoying it
  6. Thanks for commenting . I'm glad Sam didn't scare you off at all.
  7. intune

    Chapter 1

    Like Mark said.. very deep. I felt emotions bubbling up while reading so it struck some sort of chord. I liked it
  8. intune

    Promise

    I think you captured how tumultuous Rick would have felt well. Again, I think these side stories are neat I'm glad you wrote them.
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    Stuck in a Storm

    Cute side story. I like being able to see a bit more of their friendship
  10. Man in the Mirror by Michael Jackson.
  11. I'd want to be able to fly/ transport to any destination
  12. No more chapters yet Well, I'm definitely intrigued, I'm looking forward to seeing what you come out with next
  13. I definitely thought Tyler would be the one to figure it out. Instead it's Dean... now things are gonna get (even more) complicated.
  14. Ahh! This chapter is such a tease, I love it though.
  15. Did Tyler have a crush on Dean? I like how Dave's lie was exposed by a four year old, that made me laugh.
  16. Great chapter I'm getting worried because there's only a few chapters till I catch up to what's been written and this story is super addictive!
  17. I feel like Tyler passed some sort of test this chapter. He was still a nice guy despite Dave's appearance- good for him!
  18. Now the true test, will Tyler remember him? My guess is probably not, but hey, at least he won't have to be wondering what happened to the hot hunk he made out with.
  19. I can't wait to see the reactions to Davey's "ugly" look. Sounds like he went all out
  20. The review before mine totally guessed my prediction. Good chapter, very lighthearted
  21. Josh seems like a cute kid, I liked his commentary while they were talking to the sales woman.
  22. They seem like a fun friends to hang out with
  23. I'm really becoming a big fan of the flashbacks. They all seem so much more significant now that Brad is gone. It's almost like he knew something was coming.
  24. intune

    Rexer

    Such a fresh concept for a story. I enjoyed this alot
  25. intune

    Sunday

    This one was pretty hard for me to write. It's about a family member who died, and I never got a chance to say goodbye.
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