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I went to see you one last time, not knowing, that I should memorize your face. Never thinking, “well, this is it.” Every Sunday was yours, and could have been, should be. It is sad, I associate you with a weekday. I never remember, is it the beginning, or the end? Why do days feel so ordered, in my weak, and sad state? If I had known, I wonder, Would life be different? Remembering your face was not the problem, I knew you. But time
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It's the end of the world as we know it...
intune commented on K.C.'s story chapter in It's the end of the world as we know it...
Nice ending, everything wrapped up nicely. I'm glad that the coffee shop meeting and box finally got resolved (except wasn't the box really heavy?).. I was worried I'd have to be forever curious I was also touched by Percy's Mother, her reaction was heartwarming. I've really enjoyed this story, it left me with nice feelings -
Ah, the excitement of young love You captured it really well in this chapter.
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Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
intune commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Looks like Cody and Drake are going to be having some problems . It seems like Drake kinda had a thing for Max before him and Brad got serious. I don't want to read too much into it, but it seems like things are only gonna get more strained between Cody and Drake. Another good chapter! Will you teach me your tricks to writing? -
Another good chapter Are we ever gonna find out what Max's first impression was of Percy at the coffee shop. I'm still dying to find out.
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I'm pretty sure I'll make it, June works best for me too
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That's so awesome, congratulations
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Such a moving first chapter. I can't wait to see what you do with this, I'm amazed at how different the vibe of this is from your last story. You definitely have a gift for making characters relatable
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I've been listening to this song nonstop
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I think it was just the right amount. Satisfying.. but I still want to keep reading to see how things go
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A new adult Happy Birthday!
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Chapter 22...The Epilogue
intune commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Such a heartwarming ending. I'm glad everything worked out so well for them, I really enjoyed all these characters so much -
Seems like you've got some interesting dialogue going on here. One thing I might suggest is formatting your chapter so it's easier to read through, because I found it a little difficult since the lines are all cut in half. Keep writing
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Poor Quinn, he's just learning how to deal with himself and all the family things happen. I'm glad he's learning to control his outbursts though.
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I know I'm a slow updater, but I've been trying to make the chapters longer... and better ... so hopefully that counts for something. I agree that it would be pretty wild to have them all in one room.As for Jeremy, he thinks that he knows a lot of things...and that will definitely play out more as the story goes on. Happy New Year to you too! And thanks for reading/ commenting
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Haha all four in one room.. that could get a little tense Glad your still into the story, and thanks for the comment
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I'm glad you found it and gave it a shot. Thanks for the comment!
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Lucca couldn’t help it. Pacing back and forth seemed to be his only release recently. Walking the circle between his bedroom mirror and the hall, he felt sure that the movement was actually visible in the already worn carpeting. It wasn’t like him to be a nervous wreck. Well, maybe it was, but the past week had been beyond anything that he was used to. Addie had cemented that realization during their AP Chemistry class on Wednesday. He’d jittered in his seat, tapping his foot until he caug
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Can my resolution just be to outlive the apocalypse then? Nah, actually I have a few goals already. I want to: Learn to windsurf Make and eat my own sushi Go skydiving Sign up for voice lessons and Complete a story and start another one (I'm sure I'll think of more things.. but those are the ones I really want to accomplish in 2012.) And hey, Y_B you didn't tell us yours!
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Neat premise for a story. Seems like there's already some mutual affection there, so I'll have to stick around and see what happens
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i really felt for Peter when he was reading off what Jordan's crimes had done to him. It's horrible that such an awful act had to impact his life. But, I'm glad him and Jason seem to be working things out. I really liked the courtroom drama in this story, and I still wanna know: When are you going to write a romance between lawyers? I really want you to write one! Please??? Thanks for the great addition to second shot! I'm glad the characters have their matters settled once and for all.
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Justice: 1, Evil: 0. I'm glad Peter can finally be over and done with this whole mess.
