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Well Michael, we knew he was gay from the first chapter. However how many people follow the rules that are told to them? Especially the baby of the family where they are usually the ones most protected? Besides this is just the halfway point. Still two more chapters to go.

Was never much of one for beer, so, do you mind if I drink iced tea?

Why are you drinking beer at this hour of the day?

Isn't that the pot calling the kettle black?

Nock walked through the early morning mist and was grateful for the cloak. It seemed as if no time at had passed before he saw beautiful women with pale green skin waving and calling to him to come sit and share his basket of goodies with them. Their outfits left little to the imagination as they seemed to shine in the morning light. He blushed but pushed on. As he reached a spot where the canopy of trees had overgrown the broken roadway and he had to be careful not to trip over

Who said I was naughty?

Okay after all the problems at my job and my vacation being cancelled twice this year, I put in for week off that begins on Sunday and goes to next Saturday. Sorry, I never get weekends off and forget about two days off together. So I got a bonus when they gave me tomorrow off too. Now normally I would say that is just a nice bonus but the reality is tomorrow is the Riverhead County Fair. There will be baking contests, quilting contests, jams, etc. There will be carnival rides, vendors of all sorts, and it is just suppose to be a blast. On top of it all the weather is suppose to be up in the seventies, sunny, and comfortable. So that is my first official day of vacation. All the rest of my plans fell to the way side because I can't line up with my friends like I had planned to, their vacations are all the last two weeks of October. Lucky me. So I plan to go out tomorrow and just enjoy myself. Walk along seeing what is for sale, what I can find, maybe even some surprises for friends who have birthdays coming up. Then of course their is Christmas. I never know what will happen at the fair. Some years I walk out and haven't spent a dime. Other times I think I broke my wallet with my finds. lol. Anyway you look at it I just plan to relax and enjoy myself and the time off from work. Hope everyone else has a good weekend as well.

Okay I nearly choked to death on a glass of water while reading that. You are so bad but god help me if I read that, I'd lose it.

what is wrong with American television?

Thank you, Michael. I hope you enjoy the whole story once it is posted.

Forget Dexter, Who watches Bones?

Why wouldn't I watch Buffy? admits to having both Buffy and Angel, the complete series, on DVD. (I told you I was nerd!)

Why don't we stop about the moon before we have that old Buffy episode happen with the looneys?

Isn't the moon a full circle?

Why the complaint? Is there something wrong with chocolate?

Would you like a snack?

I am glad you liked it. Hang in there cause the story is written and will be posted each Sunday.

What about if I am the one cooking?

Phoenix, The story is complete. It will be published each Sunday. Glad you like it and that you commented.

Thank you Mark. I was sort of nervous with this one and just hope it is liked.

Would you want to eat the food of a bad cook?

Well the original tale had Red, a wolf, a path, a basket of goodies, and Grandma's house. Let me say I use them all just not the same way it was done in the original tale. Stay with me Daddydavek, I hope to make it worth your time.

Thank you for the review and for all the hard work you put into it to help me get it right.

I am one of those writers who enjoys a challenge. Whether it is a new world to create, a love story, a mystery, or just breathing new life into an old tale. This story came about when I actually asked in the chat room about what fairy tale I should take on and recreate. I'd already done Snow White for a prompt by Lugh, and also taken a twisted take on Sleeping Beauty for a prompt I had created. Elezbed suggested I take a look at Little Red Riding Hood. So I now had the bare bones for my work. Welcome to the world that Dama and her family lives in. In the dark future the world is no longer controlled by humanity. The creatures that were once thought of as imaginary are proven to be real. In fact, not only are they real they now rule the world and are not sweet and kind about it. This world is dark and there are elements of it every child is never told of until after they have become an adult. Vampires, Werewolves, and Elves control the world. What they command will happen without question. To disobey is a death sentence. Here children had better listen to their parents for if they don't they will end up dead or worse. Chapter one is now up in this four chapter story. If you have any comments or questions feel free to post them here or on the story pages. Thank you.

Thank you Daddydavek. I have the whole story finished and KC has done all the work on it to make it the best it can be. It will be out each Sunday. Don't worry, no breaks on this one. Enjoy.