Yeah, I was trying to set up her psychosis as an underlying trait to her personality, dropping hints until it was WHAM! Now we see just how unhinged she is. Thanks for reading Intune!
I know it's hard to read an 'in-progress' story so thank you for taking a chance on it (and reading it all at once ) It's always nice when the story is several chapters ahead so you have a nice long read with little wait for the rest. I'm trying to keep my posting schedule. there are 2 mondays that I'm gonna be out of town but I'm going to try the publish date system where you set it to auto-post at designated time...hope it works
I think a few chapters back I had mentioned a girl from my school who was evil. It always amazed me that guys went crazy over her. She was awful but some people don't look past the shell to find the chewy evil nugget center Thanks for reading.
I really hate that I took so much from my own high school years for this story (I try to leave my personal life out of my stories) but I knew this girl that was soooooo mean! She was awful to everyone for no reason, but she was sneaky when she did it so from the outside you would never know how evil she really was...thanks for reading!
I introduced the kids at school very slowly, I didn't want to dump a zillion characters in at once. There is a lot going on here that we don't know about yet.
The principal remembering everyone's name is from my own high school, the guy had been there forever and knew everyone...but he didn't have his head in his a-- err sand like Mr. Grady He was a good and fair man.
Thanks! This is not a happy ever after kind of story. A lot of my writing I try to show reality (even if it has mythical creatures ) Life isn't perfect and we don't always get to ride off into the sunset. I love the anthologies because they are so short and I try to pack a punch is such a story time, very challenging! glad you liked it
The things that come out of some people's mouths, epecially the old lady, she knew better but some people...can't slap any sense into them but sure fun to try