davides
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I liked the story. It was very interesting. I just couldn't seem to get a lock on the characters. Did you leave out their physical descriptions or did i just miss them? hair colour,eye colour, height. I just didnt know how to picture them. Other than that it was great.
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Your stories are amazing! An intellectual whirlwind! Please continue!
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This story is just too good. It does things to me. hahaha. I think i've fallen in love with every one of your characters. Wait no i hate Dereks dad and Luke. But then i think we're supposed to hate them on principle so they don't count aye? The others...DAMN. They're so fascinating it's almost unreal. Rebecca and her trusty axe and the 'indomitable mrs C'. Such powerful characters! Even Charlie and Derek's mom who are sorta weak and vulnerable-ish still come off looking strong. They're all inspiring in their own ways. I absolutely adore them!
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awesome story. love it!
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Looks AMAZIN'...will follow near religiously...hehe
