Dan Umbero
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I like this so far. Hope to see more.
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thanks for the encouragement
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nice...more please
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you really think the story should continue?
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I turned the car into the once familiar lane and watched for the drive. “David don’t go too fast or you’ll miss it.” My mother said quietly from the other side of the car. “I know mom, I use to live there too.” I said and smiled. I turned into the drive and looked over the fields where I once spent my days. The farm was leased to the neighbors who only wanted the fields. We’d come because my mom missed the place and wanted to see it once again. We’d also come back to bury my Dad. He’d fina
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A middle aged man returns to his childhood home to bury his father and confront the man from his past.
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Sorry but I think this is funny. Being unfamiliar with Lesbian relationships I'll only talk about us guys. It sounds like you all are straight. Guessing games and being coy are for girls. When I date if I like the guy I kiss him...If I really like him...well things could get intimate. Just my thoughts.....
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Thanks for posting!
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Hi I'm new to this site...looking around looks like there are some great stories and authors to checkout. Lots of reading material.
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Interesting twist to the ending neat way to bring the first person to an end. You're stories always manage to have a surprise or tell great job
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Gets better and better
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Nice story hope you continue it.
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Nice beginning I hope you continue
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Great story. I like your character development and the kismet that has brought them together. Please continue.
