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  1. evergreen

    Chapter 14

    Awesome update. Can't wait to find out more.
  2. evergreen

    The Poem

    Thank you so much
  3. evergreen

    Poem

    Thank you Hmm... the poem is also about my mother but for a different reason.
  4. evergreen

    The Poem

    Dark Cold Quiet Empty Then a white mist Wispy Twirls of emotion Picking up pace Circling Rising Thickening Whispering Quietly Then louder A whirling wind of devotion Startling force A large white cloud Enveloping Engulfing Blinding Light
  5. evergreen

    Poem

    Metaphors are fun. Thanks !
  6. Really liked the poem.
  7. evergreen

    Poem

    It's okay. I was sad when writing it. If you felt something while reading it, then I guess it did it's job.
  8. evergreen

    Poem

    Ohhh haha thank you so much!
  9. evergreen

    Poem

    Hmmm... I don't know, that's how it ends for now...Thanks for the great review
  10. evergreen

    Poem

    I had a light bright in it's fixture morose in it's picture I had a light that flickered it blinked and it shadowed then it's fixture was shattered I had a light where there's a black stain Round and smudged the middle white an empty space for where I once had a light
  11. evergreen

    Poem

    HahahaThanks Mark
  12. evergreen

    Poem

    whirling dipping and rising twirling teasing speeding … leaving tightening feeling everything today more so tomorrow untarnished unmarred unnamed but forever sorrow from a life lived by another
  13. evergreen

    Chapter 7

    Where's the chapter?
  14. I can't even wrap my head around the idea.
  15. Having expectations that are too high for sure. Aim high but don't expect high.
  16. Well, it's true. It's entirely possible to end up falling for someone after living with them for so long. I guess you sort of form a special bond (by trusting each other and etc). However, I don't know if what they would feel for each other is as true a love as say another couple who fell in love before they decided on marriage. We can all talk the talk but unless we somehow manage to try both, I guess we'll never know the truth. And maybe it's for the better. So whatever you might end up with, you can convince yourself that it's the better option
  17. evergreen

    Turnaround

    Great story However, judging from the prologue, we're still going to have to face another truckload of drama. I don't know if I could take it, heh. Anyway, thanks for sharing!
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