MarkSnark12

A really enjoyable story with exciting twists and turns. Life and love do not often, in my experience, run smoothly and I enjoy this. I do hope they get together but understand it may not work. But hope so much that it does.

A really enjoyable story with exciting twists and turns. Life and love do not often, in my experience, run smoothly and I enjoy this. I do hope they get together but understand it may not work. But hope so much that it does.

I have really enjoyed reading this story, but am disappointed it has not got any more chapters!!! Please get cracking on it!!

Cia, I'm really enjoying this story. I love the use of the language and accent and the exploration of the gods and the old times. There are two places in Chapter 2 I think it was where a few words are left out of a sentence, which would complete its meaning. Please reread and see where they happen. Good luck with the rest of the story.

lovely story. wish it was about poorer guys though, but i suppose it's aspirational!