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MarkSnark12

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  1. A really enjoyable story with exciting twists and turns. Life and love do not often, in my experience, run smoothly and I enjoy this. I do hope they get together but understand it may not work. But hope so much that it does.
  2. A really enjoyable story with exciting twists and turns. Life and love do not often, in my experience, run smoothly and I enjoy this. I do hope they get together but understand it may not work. But hope so much that it does.
  3. MarkSnark12

    Chapter 1

  4. MarkSnark12

    Stay

    I have really enjoyed reading this story, but am disappointed it has not got any more chapters!!! Please get cracking on it!!
  5. MarkSnark12

    Chapter 3

    Cia, I'm really enjoying this story. I love the use of the language and accent and the exploration of the gods and the old times. There are two places in Chapter 2 I think it was where a few words are left out of a sentence, which would complete its meaning. Please reread and see where they happen. Good luck with the rest of the story.
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    Chapter 45

    lovely story. wish it was about poorer guys though, but i suppose it's aspirational!
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