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Enoch

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  1. Thank you I hope I can continue to bring interesting chapters that everyone likes.
  2. Thank you Benji. It's always good to hear your advice. Shoe? What shoe? More will come. I promise
  3. I want to welcome all of you new type persons I think you will find that GA is a wonderful place to read awesome stories of all types, and wonderful, helpful people everywhere you turn. If you ever have a question or need help don't hesitate to asked someone or have a look at the FAQ section. Enjoy GA!!!
  4. Why would Marky have a bad day?
  5. To a very beautiful person HAPPY BIRTHDAY CURTI!! And may the next 364 day be a celebration filled with love and joy overflowing!
  6. Thank you. As for the parents reaction to events, a little will be explained in the next chapter Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. It means a lot to me
  7. Chapter 12 Answered Prayers We played a two hour game of cut-throat Risk, which I won. It was just too easy when I started off with most of North America from the draw of cards, but, I took it easy and kinda toyed with them until Roger, who started with Australia, tried to take over Asia. After the game, Aunt Alice fixed us hotdogs and chips for dinner. We took off for my house, after we ate, to watch some movies. Roger picked out C
  8. Enoch

    Chapter 9 His Knight

    I've always found mountain people to be the type that would give the shirt off their back, if someone needed it. Thanks for another terrific review!
  9. Maybe Roger would let you use his Thanks for the awesome review!
  10. Thanks Johnny
  11. Thank you Nephylim. Your advice is dead on as always. *hug*
  12. I was shocked when this poem was nominated for best poem. It didn't make the cut, but, wow. Thanks Wayne!
  13. I'm looking for feed-back here concerning a scene in chapter 12. The scene takes place in church. Without giving too much away, the pastor is giving his Sunday morning service sermon. The whole sermon is NOT quoted, but a couple of verses and a small story is a part of the dialogue. The message is positive towards gays and a positive stance is take by some. My question is this: Is this too much religion, even though it will play an important part in later chapters? I really need your opinion on this. ~Billy~
  14. I'm looking for feed-back here concerning a scene in chapter 12. The scene takes place in church. Without giving too much away, the pastor is giving his Sunday morning service sermon. The whole sermon is NOT quoted, but a couple of verses and a small story is a part of the dialogue. The message is positive towards gays and a positive stance is take by some. My question is this: Is this too much religion, even though it will play an important part in later chapters? I really need your opinion on this. ~Billy~
  15. Enoch

    Valentine's Day

    I hope you had an enjoyable day Mine, well, it sucked.
  16. Are blue balls really blue?
  17. Enoch

    Chapter 4

    I'm looking forward to his first day at work. It should be an eye opener Good chapter Wayne. But more please
  18. a race to where?
  19. If you have a meaning, is that life?
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