Enoch
-
Posts
1,755 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Gallery
Help
Articles
Events
Everything posted by Enoch
-
I think over time, Andy will show a lot of strength and character he never knew he had. I'm glad you're enjoying it Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review.
-
Aww Coming from such an awesome writer as you that makes me feel really good. Thank you!
-
All this is making my eye sight blurry, I'm afraid.
-
Thank you my friend. I'm glad you like it.
-
Chapter 6 Safe Haven The sound of his Father’s voice had Joey nearly jumping out of his bruised and battered skin. Dad looked at me with sadness in his eyes, and I looked back at him with flames of hatred in mine. I nodded yes to his unvoiced question, letting him know I had no doubt from the way Joey was reacting that the voice we were hearing did indeed belong to Joey’s Father. Dad looked back at Joey as we began to hear several loud
- 31 comments
-
- 43
-
-
-
-
Or even right?
-
WoW Is that gonna hurt taking it?
-
Hey to all you new people!!! As you are finding out already there's a lot of super cool people that are very helpful. Don't be shy in asking anyone for help. If they don't know the answer, they'll know which direction to point you. I joined back in August and it feel like home here now. I had several people offer to help me and it really made a difference. One of the first one to offer was Andy, aka Quonus10. Enjoy your time here and I look forward to reading your stories and/or poems. Billy
- 4,933 replies
-
- 1
-
-
- introduce yourself
- new members
- (and 1 more)
-
When are you going to take it?
-
Tanner is a sweetie. And I think Richie will play a big role in helping Justin in the end. And my thing about being Justin, is having Taryn for a boyfriend
-
Thank you Conner. Yes, Benji was right. But, did anyone guess that Joey had been sexually abused as well? Remember, the relationship with his coach quickly turned one-sided. He was being used by the older boy and beaten by his father for getting caught being abused. How's that for a double emotional and physical whammy?
-
I really loved the beginning. I hope to read all of this story wherever I can find it. You really should have received a lot more reviews with positive comment before now. Keep up with the story, because I really feel you have a great tale to tell.
-
A very good conclusion to a very good two part story. Although I have told you I hunger for more concerning Jason and Peter; with the way you brought their story to an end, I can happily live with this and use my own imagination to fill in the rest of their lives. I thought the way you handled the sentencing was brilliant. Awesome job Andy. I enjoyed both a lot.
-
Thank you Benji. Yeah, Joey's Dad appears more concerned about how people look at him than his own son or even his God. If anyone had been brought to that preacher actually demon possessed there's no way a demon would have been cast out with his faith. I'm not sure a demon possessed person can cast out a demon in another person. I may have to read up on that Again, thanks Benji!
-
That's a really nice start. I look forward to the next chapter! Told ya I notice people that notices me, even if I am slow
-
Awww Thank you Tim. I promise to tie it all together, But you really don't want me to tell you now do you? Ok, the person that gets murdered is..... Sorry, I can't I promise it won't be a year Thanks again for taking your time to read and leave a review. That means a lot to me.
-
I'm really glad it's not from a personal memory. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. It really does mean a lot to me.
-
Thank you for your help Wayne. With Trevor finding all my errors and you fattening up the story, I think this was a good chapter. I hope everyone enjoys it!
-
Thank you VERY much Tom. I had some good help this chapter putting some more meat on the bones. I learned a lot and I hope it shows in every chapter here on out. Good friends and loyal readers makes it easier to sit down and let my heart pour out the story. And now with my head engaged as well.... time will tell if I have a good story in me.
-
Chapter 5 Red Storm Rising Joey just dropped his head, and laid it on his desk. I took a quick glance at Mr. Ison, and saw he was engrossed in something, not paying us any attention. I was kind of in shock. I had never seen anything like this before, and I was afraid where this was going to take me; but I liked Joey, and I was scared for him. I wasn't sure why yet, but I was scared. I got up, and went over to Joey. I leaned over so
- 29 comments
-
- 46
-
-
-
-
-
Thank you Joey for taking your time to read the story and for leaving a review. It means a lot to me when people like you leave comments.
-
Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Thank you! That means a lot to me -
You may be surprised what the real story is. Stay tune.
-
Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Sorry about making you impatient, but that's probably a good thing Thank you for your kind words. I try to balance everything out and make it fun to read while setting up the characters, Again, thanks for reading and leaving a review. Your comments makes it worth while to continue the story and to write it in a way that's entertaining. -
Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Yeah, its no tat and its sad as well. But, if the boys will do the right thing in the right way, both can come out on the other side stronger and free from the past. Thank you for your review and editing Trevor.
