Kiltie69
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Thought I'd write a reveiw no I'm done with chapter 8. Love the story so far, although given the main characters age, I found it difficult at first to read about them. But as the tale continues you soon realise they are both mature beyond their years. Glad I kept reading it. Looking forward to reading more. T
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Chapter 2 Marcus stood at the window watching the yard he saw the naked trio taken to be bathed, after a while he saw their return. He was a little shocked on seeing them cleaned up. Particularly the red headed one, all three were powerfully built and all were of contrast to each other. Dark, light and fiery. He saw Gracchus and Mascius, his head of the household guiding the three men across the yard. They were led to a second, enclosed court yard leading into the villa and made wa
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Well what can I say. It was four....and woof.
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Thank you for your kind words DB.
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Souless thanks for the reveiw. Technically English is my first language. I'm a Scot. But I know my grammar is not the best.
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Having out live a number of BF's this brought back memories both painful and happy. Gonna keep reading so keep it up.
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The story is set pre Julius Caesar. Marcus, an ex centurion and roman citizen has settled to a life running his family's farm, after the loss of his parents. We find him in the slave market looking for new slaves. (the story contains some darker images)
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Marcus and the Slave. Part 1 Koen stood naked and chained before the crowd, in the city of Neapolis. The clothed man shouted in the alien tongue. Koen looked around him, people were standing watching, laughing pointing at him. Behind him another 10 captives, from his town, just as naked and chained. He remembered back to how he came here, he had been captured in a battle, by the Romans. The battle had been for a border town just inside Belgica. He was a Gaul, he was a fierce
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Character Names and Glossary. Marcus Quintilus Braxus - former first centurion of the 13th Legion. Lucius Crassus - slaver buyer and mine owner, a weasel face man who has only hatred for Marcus. Koen Lugus - former Warrior of Gaul, now slave owned by Marcus. Gracchus - former slave now bodyguard of Marchus. Bratranix - slave of Marcus, bought on same day as Koen. Lucranos - slave of Marcus, bought on same day as Koen. Marcellus - legionnaire lover of Marcus, now dead. M
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Love it. Can i have one...lol
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Happy Birthday, Mike. Have a fantastic day.
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Happy Birthday, Curti.
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Name your favourite gay movie. What did you like best about it?
Kiltie69 replied to Yuki Winchestor's topic in The Lounge
Have to say, My Beautiful Laundrette, and the Fruit Machine fom the eighties and Priest from the nineties. Shank is an excellent one for a more modern feel. For fun I like the Donald Stratchy detective movies. Pity there aren't more than 4 -
thank you DeathBoi. and its all from a dream
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Chapter 11 Keeping the Faith
Kiltie69 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 11 Keeping the Faith
Loved it again.particularly liked the pastor. Looking forward to where TJ is heading. keep it up -
Andy a touching tale of what can happen, enjoyed it. I'm a simplistic reviewer don't go deep. If it touches me I say. And this did.
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Chapter 3:Everything comes to be, because of the father I am
Kiltie69 commented on Deathboi69's story chapter in Chapter 3:Everything comes to be, because of the father I am
Ok I like the dad. May seem aloof but he is caring. Just a bit forgetful. Want to see more of him. -
Chapter 2: LOVING A MAN I HARDLY REMEMBER?
Kiltie69 commented on Deathboi69's story chapter in Chapter 2: LOVING A MAN I HARDLY REMEMBER?
sweet with a hint of darkness to come. i like -
Chapter 1 Shell of who I was
Kiltie69 commented on Deathboi69's story chapter in Chapter 1 Shell of who I was
I agree with Bugeye, the story start is great. I felt the detachment, for want of a better word, that Tanner is suffering. Felt sorry for Chance the possible Boyfriend not remebered. looking forward to more. T P.s. i also agree on the editior front. My suff was plain till i got one now its way better -
Chapter 10 When it Rains, it Pours
Kiltie69 commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 10 When it Rains, it Pours
Awesome. That's all I'll say. Loved it as I have the rest. Tom.
