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Great Story. Enjoyed the characters. I would have fallen for Anthony. After I hit him of course. He was just someone I felt sad about. My bully became my friend after I broke his nose. His parents were not impressed. Shawn was like most teens just selfish, but what do we expect from a teen who trying to lead a closet case out into the open. Reality for people occurs when we start living our life for ourselves. Porn Without Plot is something you say you write, I can't find it anywhere. Is that a long story like BSC? Weird Title. Thanks again.
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I read this story on the other site, back in the day. I was shocked when I found myself reading what I thought was a new story and having Déjà Vu. I'm glad you are completing this story. It helped my friend when I sent in to him, he was wondering what happened. He had this drama in his life, so Andy wasn't alone with this concern. I just wish he would have read this story when I first started this trek back in 2006. I was a closeted reader. I didn't share it because I didn't like some of the feelings it brought out in me. Now I'm better. You have a toddler now; this story is at least 5 years old. Congrats. Hope you have the energy, and time to complete, your story just moves me. Finally, I read Dan's story, Glad you helped with that. IT is a testament to you compassion, now back to writing your fans await.
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I have totally enjoyed this story. I really think this story is touching. I felt a connection with Jason, I lived that life of hiding the truth for so long. His mother was like my mother. What is up with those classes? Luckily I didn't have my PETER go through a beating, but the money thing was and is a sticky point. Glad those two stuck it out. Darryl truly was a great friend. Are you writing a Sequel? These characters are too rich to just leave alone. Congrats on the Baby! The gin is in the cabinet you put the baby lock on. LOL! Just in case you forgot. Sometimes the screaming makes you jumpy, the cocktail brings you back to earth. LOL!
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I loved this story. I read the story because of high reviews. I had a horrible experience with the violin. LOL! I can’t go into details, but let say I was worried. Connor is wonderful and glad he got to come out of his shadow. Jared is a complex character, glad the closet door is open for him and he came out of it. I really think you did a masterful job. The music selections were so nice, and brought me back to when I played weekly. Thanks for the memories and the wonder story.
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This story is just hard to read. I had a friend who had this problem with his family. He didn't make it. However, this story is wonderfully told.
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...You Always Get What You Deserve
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...You Always Get What You Deserve
I really think... Cooper enjoys this. In the PAST I have thought he was just plain foolish, but I scratch that now he just dumb. You don't tell the man you left your wife for, who has a small insecurity about Kyle in the first place, you think you love Kyle. How is this a good for having a good sex session. Kyle made his bed, now Cooper go lay in yours. Hopefully He picks correctly this time, I don't think I want to read a second 20 year flash forward when the gangs teeth are in a bowl for the nightly rinse. LOL! Great job again JWOLF! -
...I Had Just What I Needed Just When I Needed It
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Had Just What I Needed Just When I Needed It
I'm glad he couldn't last 8000 words. Your story was missing a spark. Hopefully he can avoid the drama that is KYLE... Then he can go back to fighting for his JOB and KIDS. Devon isn't wrong to want a fresh start but that mistake was twenty years ago. She knew CHASE was breathing. I would NEVER have thought COOPER was over men or HIM. If she read the same LIST, I read, she would have never had said I DO. She needs to accept some of this is her fault. The storm is weakening... hopefully Cooper will let it. HA... We know he won't. James should not be his middle name, Foolish comes to mind. I love your story. -
…Just When I Thought Things Could Reach a New Normal
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in …Just When I Thought Things Could Reach a New Normal
“You’re going dry for an entire fortnight?” Sebastian asked with wide eyes. He clearly thought that me holding it in for thirty days was impossible. I AGREE WITH BASS, Cooper will never last 30 days. I told you before you were a CAT 3, but now you lept to a CAT 5. You are after his job, and his kids. We all know he is poorer then the others, but really JDRAMA, you pull no punches. He could be kid less, and jobless by months end. I just looked at the weather and those clouds are growing darker. Meanwhile, he is stuck in his sexless relationship. 22 days. Ha! I said she was a scorned woman, but Devon make me see why people stay in the closet. -
...You Have to Take Things One Moment at a Time
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...You Have to Take Things One Moment at a Time
I take that back... Sex is necessary if you write that much about it. Chase is nearly forgiven... what shock is next? -
...You Can’t Get it All Right All the Time
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...You Can’t Get it All Right All the Time
Cat 3 winds are blowing... Liz the babygirl is a lying child... shocker... so is her father. Kyle is mad, what else is new. He been mad since he walk in on Cooper and Patrick back in Chapter 17. LOL! He knows Cooper like the back of his hand. This tiff is just that a tiff. MICHAEL has it bad... who goes grocery shopping and drives an hour to see his locked up girlfriend, and then hides in Uncle Cooper's house. A love sick man, glad Cooper read him the riot act. Your story is enchanting, your prose is wonderful. The lack of sex I will tolerate. -
...The More Things Change, the More They Stay the Same
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...The More Things Change, the More They Stay the Same
“Uncle Cooper and Aunt Devon, I um… my mom came home and found me and Liz… um… in bed together.” I'd Laugh if it was funny. He now has a hot daughter to watch after. I used to think Cooper's issues were a little to much, you proved me wrong. I respect him more for not freaking out. Cooper is starting to show some of the warmth and compassion, I loved toward the end of the List. Hopefully his life will calm down, and he can just go with the flow of it. LOL! Who am I kidding, your JDRAMA... this is just the eye of the storm. -
…Some Things Are Just Never What They Seem
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in …Some Things Are Just Never What They Seem
I hope Chase got some stocks and bonds or is rich from swimming deals, because at this rate, Cooper is draining Mr. Moneybanks checking account fast. Dang. Those friends of his are the biggest cock blocks I have ever read. What drama could Sebastian family cause a newly single dad of a teenage girl? Your wit, is truly wonderful to read. I think we have reached a hurricane 2. -
...Maybe is Neither Yes or Nor... It's Simply Maybe
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...Maybe is Neither Yes or Nor... It's Simply Maybe
“But it’s Chase.” That is the line of the chapter. My sister in law makes her fortune counseling people to drop that sentence from their vocabulary. Few do. So they pay her endlessly, to cope with the drama that phrase creates. Cooper is no better. LOL! The flask was a nice touch, I have mind when I'm forced to go to sporting events. Liquid courage is the source of some much fun. KYLE is just KYLE... he sleeps with his past to move on to his future husband. THIS WILL NOT LAST. What is done in the dark comes out. Spencer is going to get a shock when these two blab. So COOPER has lost his wife, his home, time with his kids, his man, his 20 year old first love for the second or third time, and now he will lose his lunch, after this announcement. What did Cooper ever do to you? Remind me never to cross you. -
...I Never Quite Knew What to Expect
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Never Quite Knew What to Expect
I loved the Flashback... CHASE was really clever. I guess Spencer was right all along. Why did Cooper never chase Spencer? They had hot sex IF I remember correctly, and they are still best friends. Is Cooper delusional? You want to sleep with KYLE now. Is that not weird opening a twenty year old door you closed for good reason? I hope it doesn't hit him on the way out. KYLE has been about KYLE since we met him. When did this leopard get new spots? Chase beggin is NOT hot. I hope Cooper closes the door on him... But we both know Cooper will open the same door back up, eventually. Your drama is so good Cooper is sleeping with his past, to try and find his FUTURE. -
Devon's a real Bitch. I'm surprised she went with a restraining order. She needs to stop selling teeth and start selling that insurance policy of hers. She would be rich! The TEXAS justice system would hopefully improve in 20 years. I guess he better pray for a different JUDGE. Does God hear his prayers? When are you going to give Cooper a chance to catch his breathe. I'm holding my breath, He needed KYLE to hold him. Gibberish! He needs KYLE like a dog needs FLEAS. Drama, Drama, Drama.
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...I Never Expected Things to be Exactly the Same
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Never Expected Things to be Exactly the Same
Your name is no longer JWOLF, it is now JDRAMA... Sheesh! You made him homeless, and now his lover to be is married... LOL! Sadly, Cooper is just going to move forward with Chase once he cools off. Your wit is a funny as ever. I'm glad I'm not Cooper. When did Cooper ever have filter. He might have used it when he told Devon he kissed CHASE. He would still be at his former home he claimed to love. I was always a CHASE fan... You make me long for KYLE... -
...For Every Person I Hurt, I Hurt That Much More Inside
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...For Every Person I Hurt, I Hurt That Much More Inside
Did Cooper tell Devon she was his fall back??? She is going to destroy him... The writing is on the wall. You move fast, chapter one he is on his couch sleeping, now he is homeless. I hope his friends care, he will need them soon. Your drama storm is just brewing... -
...I Always Felt Like I Knew What I Was Doing.
Westlake82 commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Always Felt Like I Knew What I Was Doing.
You fooled me...Cooper is still the same foolish boy, he was 20 years ago, he just has wrinkles now. He throws his 20 year marriage to the wolves for a KISS and a PROMISED commitment from an old flame that left him HIGH and DRY. Luckily the sex was hot, but Devon is going to eat him for lunch. Scorned women, never give up! -
I guess I should have taken the tag BISEXUAL seriously... I will read them more carefully in the future Mr. JWOLF. LOL! Great start! Loved the intro, I think I had deja vu... I read that before I just can't place it. PS: 20 years in the future, I hoped his sex life was still thrilling as was his heyday at SMU . I guess the future is bleak even in your world. Three weeks... Sheesh.
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JWolf, I found you on another site, and I transposed your email address. I feel bad for the unfortunate soul who has been receiving weekly reviews/rants about your stories. He finally clued me in yesterday when he checked his spam folder. He was not impressed. L I do not have the patience to re review all 25 chapters again; however a general story review is due. You have a fabulous wit, and you connect with your readers in a way few authors can. I have felt I knew Cooper, and have missed him. Then I realized he is just a fictional character, and I can revisit him like a long lost lover, without the sad feelings reliving the past can sometimes bring. I’m glad I found you here. You have been a busy worker bee; Cooper’s List did NOT feel like 180k words. Now I have a new hobby reading 15 chapters by your next update. Thanks again for the ride…
