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  1. Leesil

    After the storm

    Loved it all the way through It was very easy to read (not saying it in a bad way) and kept my mind occupied thorough the whole story ... Good job done even though it's a shame there's not a sequel
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    Chapter 21: Date

    Wow - thats the only word that comes to my mind after reading through all the chapters (dont worry - cant seem to wait for others, hoping there will be lots of them ) ... I simply cant understand how were/are you able to write this - I can only just imagine how hard it is to write about all the mixed, nervous feelings not mentioning the anxiety panics Blakes having ... so I just bow before you with a HUGE "Thank you" sign in my hands ) cant wait to read more of this wonderful story ...
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    EPILOGUE

    I know you probably get this a lot but seriously whats wrong with continuing the story? Yeah I know you wrote in authors note there wont be any sequel but why did you wrote the epilogue then? For me its just a huuuge cliffhanger I absolutely hated/hate and will hate. Dont get me wrong Im not angry, mad or a spawn of pure evil but I really loved your story - read it in less than 3 days thats how much I loved it. If I didnt know better I would think this was a rewrite from some kind of fantasy book and you should totally get published (in my humble opinion). Thank you for writing this, for publishing it and also I crave the sequel now at least I know there wont be one I should be waiting for so I can get on with my life :DDD Thanks a lot again and I hope to see more of your wonderful work here
  4. Im going to write my review of the whole story after this chapter cause for me the story ended here. How should I begin? The first thing that comes to my mind is this - I hated you, I hated the whole world, I hated all the people after what you did - the break up of Pete and Jase. I nearly cried and let me tell you that happened less times then there fingers on my left hand. I was going to write a really hateful review after that but you saved your neck by the beatiful ending which maybe wasnt romantic as I thought it would be but I liked it better than if it would be some sappy lovestory ending we see so often in films. The second thing - I loved it all the way through - it was like taking a rollercoaster ride on a ride called "life" ... everything you wrote (even the vintage cars part and even the jury and law stuff). I read your whole story during 2 days (10 hours a day) and couldnt get enough. Really loved / love your writting cant wait to read all the other stories you did. The last thinkg I want to write here - you made me see life as it is - not happy, perfect all the times but if 2 ppl love each other you could raise a mountain. Thank you for writing this and making me indirectly a better person. Got one question though - are the characters in this story somehow linked to real life or to some experiences in your life?
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