AnimalMorph

Why dolphins though? Any special reason?

YES! Finally a happy scene. I bet Jason was like o_O when he saw Philips' body / torso. Yea Jason, I feel ya. Anyway, lookin forward to what Jason's life is like outside his prison. Legatio? Centurion? Hmmm..

Why is it a good person on this story always die soon? This is so not fair. Melissa deserved a lot more that that. I mean, she is willing for the centurion to cut her head so she can save Jason. That is truly admirable. There, I write my review. Now I'm gonna go back to my room and cry for Melissa. .....Just kidding. You DO know I'm kidding right?

What! Melissa is hurt! Somebody help her! >.< Can't wait to find out what's happening in the next chapter. This story is just hook me up in a good way. And I'm late for my class too. Geez. Ah well, who cares about class. *clicking Chapter 9*

Dear god, is something bad is going to happen to Melissa? >.< I think I remember reading this chapter as fast as I could. Why? Well, because I wanna see something 'good' happens to Jason for once. Okay, on to the next chapter. *click*

Ahh,, There you go JMH. You kill Jason's Dad! What a way to start my day. **sad** Aaaanyway, that Regent never cease to amaze me with her cruelness. I sure hope Jason will get out of those freakin tower soon for his own good.

Same here. I really enjoy JMH stuffs. He is really talented at making a fantasy story. If all his stories all like this, He'll definitely my fav authors. Anyway, on to the review. Perhaps this chapter is the most heartbreaking scene. I mean, I feel really bad for Jason now. His mother hates him, his father loves him dearly but he will soon die because of the curse of a centurion. HOW FAIR IS THAT? Agghhhh! **frustrated**

Thank goodness Melissa was there when the Regent abuse / hurt / angry at Jason. I mean, her presence made Jason feel a bit better. Even just a bit, it means a lot to him. If not for her, I'm afraid Jason will try to commit a suicide or something.

Bloody hell, that Regent is REALLY something. I feel bad for the kid. Poor Jason

Ah,, Queen Eleanor. Married for power, wishing a daughter for power, that is a very classic tale of what royal family and nobility do to ensure their status. I can only say, "She is a genuine bitch in every possible way."

Ooookay, here's my review. There is no better opening than a poem to a story. Well, except maybe for a prophecy or a quote from a holy book of some kind, that give the reader an idea/ inclination of the whole story. This is even more true to a fantasy genre stories. Everything in those poem usually contain hint and clue as to what will happen in the story. More importantly, an opening that contain a poem or a quote will give more 'feelings' to those stories. So I'd say this is a good opening.

Huh??!! Paul and Eric is the SAME? How could i NOT notice? How is that even POSSIBLE? Thanks a bunch to everyone above me to give me clues of this split personality thingy. I have no idea, if u guys didn't write in in this review. No idea. AT ALL. The story is good Frosty. Very good. I do wish you elaborate more about Paul and Eric's relationships when they were still "tight" though. Probably at the time when Jordan still not entering Eric's life. Were they like a brother? Was Paul dependable? Was Eric loved Paul? Oh well...

Oh It's the spell from Final Fantasy games! I love the way the spell described. It has a lot of details and description which enhance the fantasy feels. I hope you the same applies when you tried to elaborate the summoning (assuming there will be a summoning) like Bahamut or Shiva? Eidolon is a being too so i hope they will develop a characteristic of some kind. Great work dude! I definitely will follow this story.