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Adam Thomas

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  1. Adam Thomas

    Chapter 1

    The next chapter is almost ready to be posted.
  2. Adam Thomas

    Chapter 1

    Vaniley, I hope that you find the time to continue this story. It has great promise as does your skill as a writer. Adam~
  3. Adam Thomas

    A Short Story

    Thank you LJH for your review, and the typo note. It has been fixed and the review is greatly appreciated.
  4. The plane touched down on time. It wasn't surprising given that I'd paid for it, 20 years of servitude for the opportunity to set foot in this, the land of traffic and taffy. This was my opportunity to finally take my life into my own hands, to do what I wanted, to be in control. Until this point I'd simply followed the course hardware had charted for me, taken the path presented, stepped in the spaces provided. Form the time I was born until now fate was but a doctor and this life the prescrip
  5. Twenty years ago the world was different. In a way it was also still the same. Now, as the wheels of fate still crank out more of the same he feels he can break away, break the thread that bind him, if only for one more night.
  6. It took four weeks to find a small rent controlled apartment in the heart of Chinatown. The job I’d managed to acquire wasn’t much better, working third shift moving boxes for a seafood supplier. At least Dominic had the sense to put some money in my pocket after I blacked out so that I wasn’t completely destitute when I got down here. Finding a place in Chinatown gave me two advantages. The first being that it was near the river and a decent park so I had a place to go to relax, and the second
  7. Adam Thomas

    Story

    Dessert = YUM! I'd ask for more, please, but that'd make me fat
  8. Adam Thomas

    Chapter 1

    Wow. Keep it coming!
  9. Dina was adamant I not take this lightly. As much as I hated to admit it, a screw up down there like back in receiving would end in exile for me. Arriving at the academy that thought made me shutter. As fucked up as I was, exile would be worse. One would expect the Academy to be a grandiose building, full of activity and life. The reality couldn’t be farther from that. In reality the Academy occupies the lower three floors of a subterranean complex buried in a cloud formation loosely tethered t
  10. Castiel has always been a bit self-involved. As an angel he lacks the purity and grace most have. Can a mistake he made and the resulting punishment change his ways and save his soul?
  11. I was raised an angel. A Heavenly being tasked with shepherding souls from mortal life into the ever after. It was my job to greet them, show them around, and leave them in the care of their loved ones who had preceded them. A tour guide for the dead, basically. My whole story begins the 15th of May. The year isn't important but the day is. You see, I was always a bit self-involved. I was a servant of the Lord but I didn't care much about that. Would you if you got to live in Heaven and had to
  12. Happy birthdayssssssssss
  13. Adam Thomas

    Chapter 5

    I like it. The chapter is very light-hearted, the tension cute, the potential attraction undeniably adorable. My only criticism is that the end felt rushed to me, but I think that that was the point. All in all, four stars.
  14. Well now that Mafia is over I can say this, I killed Krista.
  15. I agree. Even though our leader is gone we shouldn't dissolve ourselves. As a member of the alliance I vote alike. Vote: Wildone
  16. I is totes voting the alliance. Vote: Y_B
  17. Alliance. On a side note, to everyone who hasn't been, you MUST make your votes stand out or they will not be counted.
  18. Hey JC, that's a very mean thing to say. Unvote: Intune Vote: Johnathan_Colourfield
  19. As a side not, and a serious one at that: Now that the game is rolling DO NOT CHAT ABOUT THE GAME OUTSIDE OF THE GAME. At all. Peroid. Nada. If you do, and Advo catches wind of it, we lose him as our mod and Mafia goes up in smoke. I for one find it fun and enjoyable and would hate to lose it. So zip it. Or else.
  20. I like foopy's suggestion. Vote: Intune
  21. Are we going to make this a habit people? Am I perpetually going to be the first person to post in the mafia games?
  22. I'm not here... I'm off killing em. please leave a message after the beep..... . . . . . . . . . I'm in. BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP
  23. Honestly, I really think that, as a townie, we just killed our entire chances at surviving this. I think killing EmDee was a bad decision because her posts don't sound like cover-up. If I had to peg someone i'd say we should have lynched merlin because no matter what we post he has never once explained why he has voted the way he has. And now everyone he has voted for is dead. With six people left, and presumably three mafia members, we've already lost.
  24. Krista, love, EmDee is a she, not a he. I haven't made up my mind enough to vote, so i'll vote later, after we discuss this. but I think you both are right.
  25. Adam Thomas

    Chapter 1

    I could probably get rid of one of the breaks, so maybe in a future update...
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