No KISS !!!! Thats unfair
The whole fire scene had me crossing my fingers, nicely done. Edward as the knight in shining armour? Ihope zune is ok.
I also agree with conner about the 'big' words....but its not a big issue
Waiting for more!
Awesome chapter!!!! Great plot...makes me wonder what is going on with Edward..what he said about father and brothers...is that what happened to him?
I also loved the relationship between Zune and his mother..you had me laughing loudly!!
Waiting for more!!