No,no,no..... Asher!!!! Did u have to sleep with Tyler? I mean,yeah, I can understand the loneliness and the frustration with liking someone who is probably straight and then you have a gorgeous man who is available and willing............OK, why did I have a problem with this?
And yay, Mr. wide hairy chest is gay!!!
I am actually happy Asher came out early to Michael. The 'ball' is as they say well and truly in Michael's court...(as I type this I am think of Ziggy's comment about balls)
I dont really mind cliffhangers! See I am on your side (it helps that I am reading this when u have already posted the next chapter).
So whats wrong with Ian, he's not taking Asher's absence well, is he?
GJ
Feel sorry for Asher. I am sure u will tell us more about his relationship with his sister and with Paul. When did Allison die?
I really like Ziggy..hes funny!
GJ
I find myself feeling sorry for all parties involved....Zune, Kev and Edward. Its a shame that it took such an incident for Zune to realise that he loved Kev.
Great (and emotional) chapter! Waiting for more!
Michael is still a dbag, but i am beginning to like him nonetheless. So are you going to keep him straight or are you going to bend him our way? Make him play for Asher's team? Is he straight and oblivious to Asher's sexuality or is he gay and deep in the closet?
Michael really needs to do something about his drinking problem
Waiting for more
I love ur (yes i know a spelling mistake ) story. Dan is sooo cute and naive. I have a feeling that Chris really likes Dan and David is giving mixed signals!
Waiting for more.
GJ
Great writing, frequent mentions of 'broad, hairy chest', and 'daffy duck boxers'.......hmm.... made my day, after a long, long day at work !!!
I am seriously beginning to like Michael, he is a charming guy.
GJ
OK, so whats wrong with Michael? There's obviously something bothering him. And Asher seems to be more than just a bartender....
Longer chapter please.......SIZE matters
GJ
Eish!!! What a day!! Carol's uncle is Zune's father? Why was he not in Zune's life if could take care of someone else's kid?
Great chapter! Waiting for more!
Amazing!! Awesome story, though the ending seemed a little abrupt. I wonder what happened to Shalachman...was he one of the Haighlei mages who were killed? If he is still alive, will we see him in a sequel and will there be a final showdown with Danel?
I thought Danel and Bart would be bonded...was surprised that it was Gavin.
GJ
Cliffhanger!! I love it! I guess we will know why Sean slept with John, it seemed intentional... something to do with Thomas losing a previous bf?
What an apt description of a small low cost Indian hotel.
No KISS !!!! Thats unfair
The whole fire scene had me crossing my fingers, nicely done. Edward as the knight in shining armour? Ihope zune is ok.
I also agree with conner about the 'big' words....but its not a big issue
Waiting for more!