Eternal Ivan
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I guessed it was needed before the interest started wavering.Shortly after this, it's revealed who they are. However, for Sean and Aaron to know the identity of the Damien brothers, I'm thinking of events leading to it and a power-packed chapter. I hope it works out. Thanks for the review. Means a lot.
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Sean’s Story I--- ‘The new guy’
Eternal Ivan commented on Eternal Ivan's story chapter in Sean’s Story I--- ‘The new guy’
HI. Thanks a ton. I do need editors/beta readers. It's a tough job managing a novel. Hopefully, soon. And the teacher part. YEah, I guess you're right. I too felt it was far-fetched her calling names on the first day. However, I didn't give her dialogue a second thought which resulted in a faulty step. Thanks for the review. -
As I walked out of the Geller residence into the cold night I sensed a presence. My body stiffened, senses alert as I walked down the stony path leading towards the gate. My eyes were fixed ahead but my sharp ears were waiting for an impending movement while my olfactory perception had already recognized the scent. I heard another set of footsteps on the stone slabs on the path. The movement was brief and the person stood behind me. Without turning back I spoke. “Have you now taken up stalki
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That was a beautiful poetic prose. I really love the delicate touch your descriptions have. The imagery you create is so tender and enriched with pulchritude. I loved the story a lot. Prose Perfect!
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Now that's one awesome story. Fluidity of thoughts, emotions and situations. And the best part was the simplicity of the language accompanied with simple but vivid description. Loved it!
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The first chapter brings forth a multitude of questions and leaves a lot to guess-work. That's great and adds to the building of interest. Waiting for the subsequent chapters. The story is quite promising. Kudos!
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Read the first chapter.......very intriguing. Loads of questions and yeah didn't catch a few things. But, I guess as I read further, This becomes even entertaining.
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I stopped at the door trying to catch my breath and control my emotions flooding out of my eyes. Amanda shouldn’t see me in this pathetic state. She had tried so hard to get me out of my shell and had been really happy a week ago when I had declared my fresh beginning. I didn’t want to upset her when she already had some news about Aaron. After I was sure I was calm I rang the door bell. The door opened and I looked up to find some one else instead of Amanda standing there. I tried to re-col
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“One…Two…..THREE!” Drake shouted. Randy and I quickly began our shots of vodka. Amidst the loud music and the deafening cheers of the guys, Randy and I were gulping down drinks, each one trying to out do the other. Finally, Randy splurged and gave up. I finished the winning shot and looked around beaming. “That’s my man! The stud won! Yeah, Babe!” Drake was shouting himself hoarse while patting me on the back as a sign of congratulation. Randy looked pissed and went to the other corner away
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Liked the chapter.........And you've got an awesome eye for similes....the imagery you use is great.........and the romantic intimate moments are hot! Kudos!
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Evan’s story I—The future is dark. *************************************************** I looked into his eyes and grabbed his extended hand for the handshake. I sensed him shiver. But I also sensed an excitement in him. The warmth of his hands sent shivers down my spine, something that had not happened for a very long time now. I was always cold but Sean’s touch had the warmth I had long forgotten. I broke my chain of thoughts, smiled and walked out of the door. So long had I waited to meet
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The bright sunlight hit my face as Amanda slid the curtains from the windows. I moaned and pulled the covers over my head. I wanted to sleep. Last night had been like the many nights since that dreadful day when I had lost my parents in the car crash. The screams, the horror and the guilt kept returning to me every night. I couldn’t sleep and would lie awake looking at the ceiling. Tears would swell in my eyes as I would re-collect the memories of that tragic night, a year ago. My dreams haunted
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How far would you go for the person you love? Does love exist beyond time, life and death? Is love very complicated? Is love easy? Is love good? Or it sucks? What do you think?
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Hi. I am a newbie. As an amateur writer I am attempting a novel. Any suggestions?
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Anthology News 2011 Winter Anthology, "aftermath" Found Alive!
Eternal Ivan commented on Lugh's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Cool...!!
