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OH he he that makes sence (Going to bed fealing stupid) Ya I wonder which one is the real name too.

If it is a split personality, ( and I say If because I am not so sure myself yet) Then really both boys are the real boy if you think about it. There just 2 parts of one person but seperated in two different (say People) Oliver/David. At least in my opinion

Ok I see what you are saying with the imaginary friends. But the parents seem to act as if there are two seperate children there. They both get called seperate names and and get treated differently. The one thing that I would say that one of the parents did that would posibly point to it being a split personality or as sugested imaginary friend. is when in chapter 3 David was being dragged to the dark room and his Dad hit him and dragged him by his hair. His mother had said "

I totaly agree with that, it does'nt have to have a happy ending. But I SO hope it does . MY mom always tells me stories to read. but she won't tell me about a story if it does'nt have a happy ending. BEcause I will get upset. ( Hey IM highly emotional here)like the other day she messed up and told me about this story, and I was getting real exited because it sounded real good, and then she told me it did not end on a happy note, and that totaly busted my bubble. So now I dont want to read it because I will most likely cry. ( Remember highly emotional). So to make up for it she told me about another book. I have always heard of POppy Z Brite but have not read any of her work. SO now I am reading "Drawing Blood" which mom says is real good. So ya I like it alot so far. So I am really enjoying this story by Dom, and like I said I hope it ends Happy, but even if it does'nt I will break my little preferance and read it anyway, because I really enjoy all of Doms storys, and I know no matter how it ends it will be good and entertaining. I am already hooked. So way to go Dom you are awsom. I love this story. Ok Here is a question. I think that OLiver and David are the same person with a split personality.But the question I keep asking myself because I really don't know is. IN chapter oneit says, "Laughter interrupted Oliver Martin

You Know It may be different from the other story's but I am REALLY enjoying it alot. PArt of me thinks it is split personalitys, but then I think Dom is trying to trick me and they really are two people. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Im with frank though David did seem kinda creepy at first, but honesly I like David and Oliver, or both personalities if it is one person. Oh no I am confusing myself now. Maybe I should go to bed.

Dom Honestly I would try another vet because when we had to put our dog down the cremated him and gave him back and we buried him in the back yard. I dont see why they are giving you problems

Ok Dom that was so hot. I really like this story, you always have ideas that just make me come back for more. I loved that last 3 stories that you have writen so much and I already know that I like this one just as much. Keep up the good work. I know as long as you are wrighting stories I will be here to read them. Oh and can I say again that that chapter was so HOT And about Nelson only wanting to get into Milo's pants. I dont think that is totaly it. I mean ya he obviouslt wants in his pants. But I think that he is so demanding and forward because he knows Milo can change at any minute and run off and he wants to keep him there. and if kissing will keep him there he will do it. Plus he wants to do it.

OMG that was a great chap and I changed my mind I want Rory with Seth yes that is my final answer! And oh no please dont let Eddie be hurt bad. I dont think I could handle it.

I totaly agree with you and I hope that Luke and Rory still end up together at some point. LIke you said I love Seth but I LOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE Luke.

Ok I just had a realization.I have been saying for weeks that I would not mind rory being with Seth or Luke, but when Luke said it was Dave my heart broke because I realized I really wanted it to be Rory. And by the last statement in the chapter he may actually have fealings for Rory, and if thats the case Woo Hoo. I feal bad for saying it but I guess deep down I have always wanted Rory to be with Luke. I love Seth dont get me wrong. All I know Is that I have to go with LRITE. I am a LRITE supporter. and wats even more odd is I feal like I am betraying Seth by saying that Like I said before I will be happy with Luke or Seth, but I hope its Luke, But Dom if thats what your gunna do is make Rory with Luke please dont hurt Seth to bad

I like that as Rory too

OMG I am heart broken. OH the Pain. It was a wonderful chapter, but I am so sad now. The fact that Seth sees it obviously means that it is probably true. And I cant help but be sad now. I like Luke alot . And I think that Rory and him would be great together. But I like Seth to . It would have been so much easier if Lukes crush would have been Dave or even that other guy, but if it is actually Rory, then I am heart broken because one of the guys that I like so much is bound to get hurt, and that is just sad. Like I said before I wont mind rory being with Seth or Luke. But I don't want Seth or Luke to get hurt. I dont think that Grandma Alice is going to die for the simple reason that this story is alot about Rory and Learning about himself , making choices, and getting through the past to move forward. And I think if Grandma Alice were to die that it would be an easy way out for Rory. And as we all see Rory never has anything easy. but thats my opinion. I could be wrong. Aaron what can I say about Aaron, I still think he is an A** but I can't help but beleive he was seriouse when he said that he had liked Rory. And like Rory and Seth I kinda do feel sorry for him. Ya he brought all of this on himself, and deserves what he gets. I just hope that he changes,l I don't want him with Luke Rory or Seth, but I do hope he changes, and gets to be happy. But he's still an A**. And finaly like I said before I love Seth and Rory together, but I would also love Luke and Rory together. (Drowning in missery) Well dom other than the pain in my chest, that was a wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens.Your great. Much Love to you all. Tiff - OTRFK

You know when I was wrighting it I knew I was spelling that wrong but I could not remember for the life of me. Now I know

I like most of those

Ok so I was at one of the Yahoo gro0ups that I go to for the story's Something Unexpected and Good guys finish last and the Author had a pole of the best story of 2005-2006 and the choices had Doms DD on it. and he is so winning the pole like most of the votes are for him. That has to say something. Great job Dom

Oh my god that would be heart renching and the most romantic thing I have read. I dont want Seth to hurt Rory like that but I think the whole Luke think is great. I would rather Seth hurt Rory than Rory hurt seth for luke I dont know I am fickel. I will go for eather Seth or luke. Uh I am so confused. I think grandma Alce will die though.

Well since everyone elce has put a responce so will I. All of these responces are in Gilbert Arizona since that is were I grew up. Kindergarden starts at age 5 but only if you turn 5 before Sep 1st , I had to wait till I was 6 since my birthday is on the 17th of September. That sucked. The schools here are (K- 6th grade) for elementry school. Junior High is (7-8) High school was (9-12) 9- Freshman 10-Sophmore 11- Junior 12- Senior. High school prom is 12th year in May. Homecoming is usually in October I beleive. And sometimes you have formal dances like Christmas formal and so on. All sorts of events like Football. Baseball and Basketball games. We had Dance concerts for the Dance class. Wrestling matches. and of cource assemblys. There are 7 classes in a day same everyday for a whole semester there are 2 semesters in a year. Summer break went for around June to August Christmas break was a week before christmas to New years. Spring break was in the middle of March or April. At the End of each yaer in High school we had a whole day of sighning year books and a party with they showed videos of the year of like people walking through the halls having fun, events and so on. Wellthats about all the main stuff hope i helped

Thats horrible for someone to do that. The way I see it is I like all your stories so you have just given me double things to look forward too. I really have enjoyed reading your stories and I know I will continue as long as you keep writing. Keep it upyou are great. Tiffany

On the whole why Seth is going to pick up Aaron thing. I dont see any other motives to it other that being nice, but I do know where Rory is coming from because I know if I was in his shoes I would be Jelouse no matter what. ( Sigh)

I want to cry. I am just so totaly confused on who I want Rory to be with. I looooove Seth with Rory Oh my god they are wonderful and I so want them to work out together. But like I said before I Loooove Luke and I want him to be so very happy I want him to get his crush. So now im depressed because Sometimes I get so wraped up in the story I forget it is fiction, and I want to get out the phone book and find them all and get luke to tell me who he likes and kick Aarons but and tell him to leave Rory and Seth alone. but then I remember its just a story. So yes if your all wondering yes i am obsessed Well Sorry for the ramblings. And I agree with you Glomph on the quote below QUOTE But after Aaron, I swore to myself that I wouldn

I can totally see all those expecially the rory that is the best one yet i think

Well, I dont know what to say. That was amazing, not only did you touch the readers that always post here, but you also brought many new people to post, that has to say something. You have a great talent Dom. Thank you for the great chapter as well as a great story. I was reading it and I am so highly emotional (hello I cried when the ant died on Honey I shrunk the kids ) lol But i was crying when reading parts of this, and my son woke up to go to the bathroom ( potty training) and he just stoped and looked at me fromthe doorway and said( was wrong Mommy) I couldent help but laugh. So now my son thinks Im weird. But Through I am highly emotional I usually dont cry when reading stories, but this one made me cry. Great job. I look forward to reading more. Tiffany

Dont worry I check just as much as you do I just cant help it . It starts when I wake in the morening and ends right before i go to bed.

Well Here is something for all you Blockbuster haters . I used to work there for like ever and alot of people would call in and say that they received a call saying that they did not return a movie when the customer was positive that they did. Well let me tell you all a couple things.only about 1/4 of those customers had relized they did not return the movie. the other 3/4 of the customers that called we ended up eather finding the movie on the shelf because some one skipped over it when scanning in movies, and then sometimes on rare ocation the ones that axidently do not get check in get checked out to another customer without it being checked in in the first place. Beleive me it really happens. Also I am probably the worst person with late fees there, even when I still worked there. ONce I have 98 dollars in fees I never paid them of course because that is just stupid. But I went in the other day and they were gone,probably because I complained alot. But talk to the store manager. They do alot to make the customer happy, because they dont want complaints. But honestly if you say you turned it in You most likely did and its a screw up on there part. Oh and my boss told me once when I worked there that they really cant do much about the missing movie because its your word against theres. Who knows but if you decide that you are not going to pay the fee for it. and they decide that you cant rent untillyou do all you have to do is go to another Blockbuster tell them you dont have an acct yet and open a new one there. Then you get a whole new acct card and everything. And you can use that card at any Blockbuster. Wellenoph of my ramblings. But seriously when you talk to them tomarrow tell them to check there shefs for the copy you saposavly have. They will probably find it. Hope all ends well.