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    Chapter Four: Children Mark was staring off in the distance; they had put the kids to sleep in Mark’s bed. Sara had sobbed herself to sleep and he had to rub Kyle’s back before he joined his sister. Tyler was staring at him in looks between frustration, confusion, pity, and sympathy. He wanted to tell him, tell him everything about Scarlet and Victor and even Terry but he couldn’t if he opened his mouth he would start sobbing again he knew it. He knew Tyler felt betrayed. Mark was very open on
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    Shadows

    Lalanekomaster commented on Lalanekomaster's story chapter in Shadows

    Well things will be explained at least concerning Mark and his kids other things will have to stay a secret for a bit ^^ though if you think things are happening to fast or too many things aren't explained and you're confused do tell me! Thanks for the review ^^
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    Shadows

    Lalanekomaster commented on Lalanekomaster's story chapter in Shadows

    I'm a horrible procrastinator sorry ^^ though I'm back now! Most of your questions will be answered in the next chapter (or at least concerning Mark) Tyler's past is going to stay a mystery for a while. Your awesome for reviewing it's appreciated!
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    Chapter Three: Shadows Tyler couldn’t stare at Mark any longer; those eyes were too blue and too cute. He would end up molesting him, he knew it. That wouldn’t happen, he was straight and they were roommates and friends, if things got icky – not that he’d ever let it get to a stage where it could get icky – it would ruin everything. Mark was one of a small group of people he knew – not counting family – that he tolerated, maybe even liked. He was not about to fuck it up. Nope not happening. A
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    Let's hope I keep that interest ^^ More surprises to come promise ^^
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    Very good you caught that *winks* nope it wasn't an error on my part all shall be explained just keep reading ^^
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    Chapter 1

    Lalanekomaster commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1

    You just... ended it... *sobs* I'm selfish I wanted to know what happened net It was good though, I enjoyed it good job!
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    Chapter Two: Small Problems and Even Smaller Problems Mark watched Tyler with a curious, hopeful look. Tyler couldn’t not notice. He flirted with girls nonstop; he had to know when somebody was flirting with him, that Mark was flirting with him. Tyler just scowled at him. “I’m not your slave Mark, do it yourself.” Mark wanted to pout except that would make him look girly, guys don’t pout, “But I can’t cook.” Tyler glared, “And I suppose you can’t get off your butt and go across the street ei
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    Tyler was hot, nice and funny but had the worse luck with girls. Mark is the care free artist who is both Tyler's roommate and dying for Tyler's attention. It's just too bad that Tyler is too clueless to notice and then his kid shows up... what!?
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    You Fell Into the Back of My Mind By Lalanekomaster Chapter One: Delusions It always happened this way it seemed, for Tyler, get a girlfriend, lose interest in a week, play along for a month and then break up before it got serious. He hadn’t even got pass second base with a girl he was in a relationship with, he was hot, he knew that but somehow this always seemed to happen. He wasn’t sure he had a ‘type’ per say though each girl was cute, sweet and rather enthusiastic but not too enthusiasti
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    I actually find that the opposite gender is most liley to confuse you and therefore you find them dificult or 'complicated' because you have never been in their shoes or have to think like them. I however am confused by just about everybody cause I'm weird like that
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    Teenagers are scary when they go into obsessed mode... no one is safe, nobody is given mercy and nobody survives when they happen to look like a celebrity. You are either trampled by crazy fans or killed when you’re discovered to be a fake...
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    ... I... can't...close... my... eyes... awww cute cat ^^
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    Hmmm sounds interesting... I shall look it up... though killing the cop thing... eesh my cousin is a cop... tough break
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    In my experience there is more of a chance of receiving good reviews then bad ones simply because if someone doesn't like something they don't comment, unless it's really bad or they're jerks so don't get scared. By the looks of your summary/idea you have a lot so go with it! Just write and if you're new at it I find that it is easier to write in clumps, just get out all the ideas you have while they're fresh and good even if it isn't in chronological order. You can edit it later or get a beta or editor to do it for you, let them suffer! Lol have fun writing ^^
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    Thank you for your help. I'm pretty sure my problem is I never really think up a story but a summary. From that summary I'll write whatever comes to mind and then get stuck. Sometimes if I really like the idea I'll come up with an outline but then I get stuck with the outline... it's a tiresome process. I'll try to work harder with the outlines hopefully It'll work out. Thank you again.
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    Hi ^^ I have this habit of writing a story, getting to about a thousand to two thousand words and then getting stuck. I have a ton of ideas but I can't ever really keep with one specific one, I've just put them off and write about other ideas in my head. I was wondering do you think I should just stick with one story and wait till something comes or keep with what I have been doing. Or maybe something entirely different? Do any of you have some insight? Thanks.
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