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You didn't did it again sid...oh god you and your cliffhangers...you know you must be sued for snatching away our sleep with your cliffhanges. I hate you. Please update soon and let us know what happened to kyle, riley and jess. I just pray that everyone would be fine and riley and kyle will be together again. Very nice, interesting, emotional and intriguing chapter sid...loved it:-)
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Finally they are going to talk. I just want them to make love soon...that would be amazing hehehe. I really liked sasha and kaito...kind of 'a friend in need'. Let's see what have you planned for us and of course for ryo and sui in coming chapters and btw where is rin? Very nice chapter sui...loved it:-)
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That tohru is a bitch. Was it necessary sui to end this chapter this way...exactly opposite the way you ended previous chapter. Everything was going good and then all this...huh. I hope everything will be fine in next chapter.
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So finally my ryo and soubi are together. I really find ryo's possessiveness cute and romantic and hot and...okay i guess i must concentrate on the review. Soubi dying his hair black again for ryo was damn romantic. You know sui it is one of the chapters which leaves you with a smiling face and ticklish feeling...i loved it:-)
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Hey sui, how are you? I hope you missed me. Now back to the review. Do i need to tell you that i hate sherry? I guess not but i loved josh's family, specially eve and alicia...alicia was just like lily. shane was adorable. I really liked the way you described the moments josh and shane shared. I can well understand what alexi would have been thinking. For me the best part of the chapter is where alexi compares his 'formal' family to josh's 'informal' family. And of course how could i forgot about lily and taka, that was a good surprise. Great work sui, as usual i loved it:-)
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Hey layla, thanks for the review. I'm glad you have fun reading this chapter. Zune's promise to becca is going to do many changes in his, kev's and edward's life. You'll know about that in coming chapters.Take care and god bless you:-)
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Hey connor, thanks for the review. Next chapter will make it clear what zune gonna do about his promise to becca. I'm glad you liked this chapter. About becca, well she still has to go a long way about which you'll come to know in coming chapters.Take care and god bless:-)
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Hey lisa, thanks a lot for your review and your help. While writing this chapter i also got quite emotional thinking about edward's mom. Glad you felt the same. You are right, it won't be easy for zune to become friends with edward but i have full faith in zune just like edward's mom.Take care lisa and god bless you:-)
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Chapter 3: Fire Zune You know the morning you wake up hearing chirping of birds, feeling warm solacing sunshine on your face making its way through the window glass and you’re thinking about a hot guy who at the end of the day could be your boyfriend? It was that sort of idyllic morning for me. Despite last night’s debacle and my ailing wrist, I was feeling full of life. I was just so happy to be alive. I pushed the sheets off me, stretching my limbs and smiling, ready to embrace the beautif
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Amazing chapter sid...highlight of the chapter was those flashbacks. I was wrong...gabe and kyle never married. I also felt sorry for gabe and could understand riley's guilt. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter. What happened after gabe's death? So far it was the best chapter of story...great work sid...keep it up.
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I just hope soubi tells ryo everything about that jerk and ryo breaks every bone in hiro's body. You know i was so much relieved when soubi escaped from his grasp. Waiting for the next chapter sui...i hope you'll update soon.
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I just hope shane still remembers joshua as his dad and become a part of alexi's life too. I'm glad that alexie is out of adrian phase now and he and joshua are together. I hope coming chapters will bring more happiness for them. Again a very nice chapter sui...loved it...waiting for more:-)
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Hey sui, every word of this chapter was full of romance. I don't know why but i was blushing like an idiot throughout the chapter. I read it twice and really enjoyed it. Loved it. Great chapter sui...moving to the next one.
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Hey layla, thankyou. I'm glad this chapter turned out the way i wanted it to be. Take care and god bless you:-)
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Thanks layla..for the review. I'm glad you had a good time while reading it. Take care and god bless you:-)
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Hey layla thanks for the review. About that word 'evildoers', i used it intentionaly..in chapter 4 you would come to know why. Take care and god bless you:-)
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Wow what a chapter sid. I so wanted to know what happened about the marriage of gabe and kyle..i guess they got married that's why kyle got gabe's last name and used it as his pen name. Well i hope i'll get to know many things in next chapter.. on love making scene i'm with asambav...good work sid..keep it up:-)
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Hey lisa, thanks a lot for the review. I even read your review for the fourth chapter, lol.I am glad you liked this chapter and must thank you for working so hard with me on it. Your valuable suggestions made this chapter what it is. Well i know many of you guys thought that kev woule be there to save zune but it was ed..there are many more surprises yet to come..so just wait and watch..take care lisa and god bless you:-)
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Rin is a top class bastard..sorry but i couldn't stop myself from saying so. I so wanna kick his ass. Ryo did the right thing to punch him. I think soubi must trust ryo..m sure he'll never break his trust. Every scene in which ryo was there, was my favorite. Kaito was cool. Great chapter sui...i hope you'll post next chapter soon:-) And btw when are you planning to update next chapter of 'EBAC'?
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Happy Birthday:-)
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Chapter 4: The Portrait Zune It’s Sunday and I’m sitting on my porch in a pair of blue jeans and a white three quarter shirt, waiting for my boyfriend to come pick me up. No, we are not going on any date. No, I’m not going to meet his mom either. I think I should raise the curtain from this little suspense. I’m going to Edwards’s place. Surprised? So am I. If a few weeks ago, someone would have told me that one day I’d be going to Mr. Arrogant’s house, I would have called him harebrained and
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Hehehe...thanks a lot joann for your review. I'm so happy that you think i'm improving. That whole fire scene couldn't be what it is without lisa. I'm glad you liked it. Take care and god bless you:-)
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Hey stephen, thanks for the review. I'm glad you are having good time reading it. It was very difficult for me to write this chapter, specially that whole fire scene. If you like it, more than half of the credit goes to my proof-reader Lisa. I'll try not to disappoint you in coming chapters. Take care and god bless:-)
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Hey Gj, thanks for the review. I know i have some problem with those big words but i promise i'll work on it. Thanks once again Gj..take care and god bless:-)
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Hey Connor, first of all thanks a lot for your review. I know I have some issues with those 'big words'. My proof-reader Lisa taught me a lot of things regarding this problem and I'm working on it. I promise I'll try to improvise in next chapter. Take Care and God bless:)
