berwynbearcub
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Spooky! Not something I would want to read at night if I'm all alone with a storm raging outside the door. It's a damn great read!
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The building suspense is agonizing!
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A feeling of eerie suspense and foreboding permeates this chapter. Well done!
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The heat that you conjured in this chapter is phemonal!
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What a wonderful, life-affirming conclusion to the story! Thank you so much.
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The suspense just keeps ramping up higher and higher!
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Another fascinating and gut-wrenching chapter. One thing: I think, judging by your definition of "masochist", that you meant "sadist" instead. A sadist gets pleasure from inflicting pain on others. A masochist enjoys having pain inflicted on themself.
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This was a gut-wrenching chapter. I really empathize with Ghor, who is far more noble and steadfast than anyone suspected.
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Powerful! I have no other words.
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This was a real nail-biter! And not just because of the storm.
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A fascinating turn of events. And a very creative scrambling of the words we know to create the alien language. I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.
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"The game's afoot, Watson!" I can hardly wait until the next chapter.
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This is an extremely satisfying story. I can hardly wait until Chapter 3! How Aethan and Ghor manage to work out their differences will be a complicated and prolonged story, I'm pretty sure. And it wouldn't surprise me if the approaching storm destroys the prison completely.
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WOW! I wasn't prepared for such carnage on Easter Sunday. A master stroke.
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This story is a beautifully written, skillfully plotted, and marvelously developed addition to the Gay Authors site. Each chapter makes me look forward impatiently to the next one. I am thoroughly enjoying each posting. Bravo!
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What a Draconion marriage contract!
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I can hardly wait until Wednesday for the next chapter.
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Life for Aethan is looking extremely bleak at the moment. I look forward to seeing how this develops.
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What an interesting development! So most of Vash's carefully laid plans for Aethan's survival have been forestalled. It will be interesting to see how he adapts to the penal colony.
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So now Aethan is on his own. At least Vash died knowing that he had fulfilled his promise to Aethan's mother. May he rest in peace.
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The backstory in this chapter is fascinating! I am totally hooked on this story. I hope that nothing awful happens to Vash, although I have a feeling that my hope may be in vain. Aethan still needs him.
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What an exciting second chapter! The suspense and thrills just keep coming. I love it!
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1.01: Bleeding Skies
berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.01: Bleeding Skies
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Chapter IV: The Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come
berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter IV: The Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come
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I love this so far. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.
