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Spooky! Not something I would want to read at night if I'm all alone with a storm raging outside the door. It's a damn great read!

The building suspense is agonizing!

A feeling of eerie suspense and foreboding permeates this chapter. Well done!

The heat that you conjured in this chapter is phemonal!

What a wonderful, life-affirming conclusion to the story! Thank you so much.

The suspense just keeps ramping up higher and higher!

Another fascinating and gut-wrenching chapter. One thing: I think, judging by your definition of "masochist", that you meant "sadist" instead. A sadist gets pleasure from inflicting pain on others. A masochist enjoys having pain inflicted on themself.

This was a gut-wrenching chapter. I really empathize with Ghor, who is far more noble and steadfast than anyone suspected.

Powerful! I have no other words.

This was a real nail-biter! And not just because of the storm.

A fascinating turn of events. And a very creative scrambling of the words we know to create the alien language. I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.

"The game's afoot, Watson!" I can hardly wait until the next chapter.

This is an extremely satisfying story. I can hardly wait until Chapter 3! How Aethan and Ghor manage to work out their differences will be a complicated and prolonged story, I'm pretty sure. And it wouldn't surprise me if the approaching storm destroys the prison completely.

WOW! I wasn't prepared for such carnage on Easter Sunday. A master stroke.

This story is a beautifully written, skillfully plotted, and marvelously developed addition to the Gay Authors site. Each chapter makes me look forward impatiently to the next one. I am thoroughly enjoying each posting. Bravo!