berwynbearcub
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Thank you for allowing us to accompany you on this journey. I don't know how I can wait until the next arc begins.
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What a relief to find out that Ghor is still alive and fighting to get back to Aethan! I was worried for a chapter.
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A memorable conclusion to this arc of the story. I'm a bit uncertain of one thing: Did Hiernymus follow them into the light, or has he stayed with Aethan in his mind?
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Spooky! Not something I would want to read at night if I'm all alone with a storm raging outside the door. It's a damn great read!
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The building suspense is agonizing!
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A feeling of eerie suspense and foreboding permeates this chapter. Well done!
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The heat that you conjured in this chapter is phemonal!
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What a wonderful, life-affirming conclusion to the story! Thank you so much.
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The suspense just keeps ramping up higher and higher!
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Another fascinating and gut-wrenching chapter. One thing: I think, judging by your definition of "masochist", that you meant "sadist" instead. A sadist gets pleasure from inflicting pain on others. A masochist enjoys having pain inflicted on themself.
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This was a gut-wrenching chapter. I really empathize with Ghor, who is far more noble and steadfast than anyone suspected.
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Powerful! I have no other words.
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This was a real nail-biter! And not just because of the storm.
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A fascinating turn of events. And a very creative scrambling of the words we know to create the alien language. I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.
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"The game's afoot, Watson!" I can hardly wait until the next chapter.
