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This is an extremely satisfying story. I can hardly wait until Chapter 3! How Aethan and Ghor manage to work out their differences will be a complicated and prolonged story, I'm pretty sure. And it wouldn't surprise me if the approaching storm destroys the prison completely.

WOW! I wasn't prepared for such carnage on Easter Sunday. A master stroke.

This story is a beautifully written, skillfully plotted, and marvelously developed addition to the Gay Authors site. Each chapter makes me look forward impatiently to the next one. I am thoroughly enjoying each posting. Bravo!

What a Draconion marriage contract!

I can hardly wait until Wednesday for the next chapter.

Life for Aethan is looking extremely bleak at the moment. I look forward to seeing how this develops.

What an interesting development! So most of Vash's carefully laid plans for Aethan's survival have been forestalled. It will be interesting to see how he adapts to the penal colony.

So now Aethan is on his own. At least Vash died knowing that he had fulfilled his promise to Aethan's mother. May he rest in peace.

The backstory in this chapter is fascinating! I am totally hooked on this story. I hope that nothing awful happens to Vash, although I have a feeling that my hope may be in vain. Aethan still needs him.

What an exciting second chapter! The suspense and thrills just keep coming. I love it!

What a rip-roaring beginning to the story! I'm glad you're back.

I love a happy ending! Or is there still one more chapter?

I love this so far. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.

I am loving this backstory.

I shall miss the company of these fine men. Thank you for sharing their story. I can hardly wait to see what you're up to next!