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  1. berwynbearcub

    3.14

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 3.14

    A fascinating turn of events. And a very creative scrambling of the words we know to create the alien language. I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.
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    3.10

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 3.10

    "The game's afoot, Watson!" I can hardly wait until the next chapter.
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    2.15

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 2.15

    This is an extremely satisfying story. I can hardly wait until Chapter 3! How Aethan and Ghor manage to work out their differences will be a complicated and prolonged story, I'm pretty sure. And it wouldn't surprise me if the approaching storm destroys the prison completely.
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    Chapter 7

    berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 7

    WOW! I wasn't prepared for such carnage on Easter Sunday. A master stroke.
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    Chapter 5

    berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 5

    This story is a beautifully written, skillfully plotted, and marvelously developed addition to the Gay Authors site. Each chapter makes me look forward impatiently to the next one. I am thoroughly enjoying each posting. Bravo!
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    Chapter Three

    berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter Three

    What a Draconion marriage contract!
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    1.08

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.08

    I can hardly wait until Wednesday for the next chapter.
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    1.07

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.07

    Life for Aethan is looking extremely bleak at the moment. I look forward to seeing how this develops.
  9. berwynbearcub

    1.06

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.06

    What an interesting development! So most of Vash's carefully laid plans for Aethan's survival have been forestalled. It will be interesting to see how he adapts to the penal colony.
  10. berwynbearcub

    1.05

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.05

    So now Aethan is on his own. At least Vash died knowing that he had fulfilled his promise to Aethan's mother. May he rest in peace.
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    1.04

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.04

    The backstory in this chapter is fascinating! I am totally hooked on this story. I hope that nothing awful happens to Vash, although I have a feeling that my hope may be in vain. Aethan still needs him.
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    1.02

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in 1.02

    What an exciting second chapter! The suspense and thrills just keep coming. I love it!
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    What a rip-roaring beginning to the story! I'm glad you're back.
  14. berwynbearcub
    I love a happy ending! Or is there still one more chapter?
  15. berwynbearcub
    I love this so far. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters.
  16. berwynbearcub

    Twin O'rre

    berwynbearcub commented on ValentineDavis21's story chapter in Twin O'rre

    I am loving this backstory.
  17. berwynbearcub

    Epilogue

    berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Epilogue

    I shall miss the company of these fine men. Thank you for sharing their story. I can hardly wait to see what you're up to next!
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    Chapter 21

    berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Is Vane the Claggart to Blake's Billy Budd? I think that Pitt is fashioned as Vere.
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    Chapter 17

    berwynbearcub commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 17

    I just discovered this story yesterday, and I have devoured all 17 (so far) chapters like a starving man! What a rip-roaring yarn of a tale! Recalling the beginning of the first chapter, I hope that ultimately all will turn put well for Burke and Pitt, but I eagerly await further developments until they finally reach their final fates. Thank you for this beautifully plotted, marvelously written tale.
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    Epilogue

    berwynbearcub commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Epilogue

    I'm so sorry that this story has come to a close. It has been a joy to read from start to finish.
  21. berwynbearcub
    Sorry to see this story end. Now that Jubal and Lucas are settled in, I was hoping to read more about Reid and Billy, and how their life journey plays out.
  22. berwynbearcub
    There seem to be a few small issues with this chapter, using the wrong name in places ("Lucas" instead of "Jubal" and vice-versa), but that's understandable considering what you have been through. May you find solace in knowing that your sister-in-law is free from her pain. And your mare lived a good, long life. Although you don't know me, you are in my thoughts.
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    What an incredible chapter! A lot to absorb and work through. Well worth waiting for.
  24. berwynbearcub
    Oh, great, leave us dangling on tenterhooks, why don't you? A seriously great chapter, @Grumpy Bear. Every time I think you've reached the pinnacle, you prove me wrong by surpassing yourself in the next chapter. Thank you!
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    War or Peace

    berwynbearcub commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in War or Peace

    Welcome back, @Grumpy Bear! This chapter lays the groundwork for a truly epic encounter. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter.
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