Mann Ramblings
-
Posts
6,904 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Mann Ramblings
-
Cadet Fourth Class • III
Mann Ramblings commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Fourth Class • III
I’ve broken a paddle or two on him in the process. -
There's a line from the Golden Girls that says something about being under more sailors than a Naval toilet, but I'm not sure if that applies...
-
Fergus is his own worst enemy. He holds through power not loyalty, and that rarely bodes well for anyone.
-
while I love the idea of the Pound Puppies edition, I'm barely managing the weekly chapter. Maybe if the boys survive...
-
Yes. Look what crazy stuff @Carlos Hazday has been doing. Lead the mob there.
-
Doris added real magic into this chapter. I adore her.
-
Fergus and his hold on the pack seems to be eroding due to his narcissism. We'll have to see how desperate he's becoming to reestablish that power.
-
**pulls the line in slowly** oh, oh... not so fast...
-
Moi?
-
Doris saved this chapter for me. I needed this chapter in the timeline, but it felt a little weak. Adding Doris gave a new dimension and fix an issue I had on "who's watching the children?" You know Shayna can't be trusted to do it long term. I wish I could have included Doris sooner, but this is a good place to introduce her regardless.
-
I swear I'm going to start inserting stuff into your CJ-verse stories and see if you notice.
-
You have to wait until next week to find out.
-
I've been really strict on the timeline so far and don't want to start messing with it. We get back to our boys next week, so shut up.
- 27 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
The full moon had fallen out of sight, marking the phase’s end. Fergus bid it good riddance. With his duties complete, he could hopefully turn his attention to more deserving matters. “Was that as bad as I think it was?” Granger asked. Once he yanked his shirt down over his head and body, Fergus clenched his fists against his sides to quell the urge to strike his second. “It was a fucking disaster. Three nights and three pack runs. Each one worse than the last.” Frozen grass made
- 27 comments
-
- 64
-
-
-
-
-
-
Normally, I try to personally respond to comments, but this chapter hit home for so many, I didn't know how or if I should. So I'm thanking everyone who read and commented, so I don't have to say anything that might be considered a Mr. Burns level of malevolence or drift into spoiler territory. See you on Wednesday as we work our way through the phase, day by day. Night by night...
-
The full moon phase could be hard on a new wolf, so Jimmy did his best to make Sawyer’s transition easier on him. After being up all night, Sawyer’s boundless energy plummeted and he fell into a restless sleep for several hours only to wake mid-afternoon craving mass quantities of food and physical contact through sex. This part Jimmy and his wolf enjoyed. Providing for his mate gave him a sense of completion—of belonging—missing from his life since the massacre at the pack house. He’d forgo
- 13 comments
-
- 75
-
-
-
-
-
-
see previous response...
-
**evil laughter**
-
Full Moon lasts three days...
-
You can't believe I torture my characters and readers? Are you new?
-
Shut up before I block you and you'll have to wait for months to find out how it turns out.
-
Next chapter is ready to post for Wednesday as I work on the next. See you then!
-
I can't help the perviness. It's ingrained.
-
I'm look ing forward to seeing how they get along with his wolf too.
-
I used a Pimp Name Generator for Rudolph's Tijuana Christmas. It's like an author's version of Rule 34
