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Jimmy's had a rough couple of days. He'd gonna need to process this.
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Fergus had been barely able to sit still since Jimmy called. “I have the rogue. Meet me in an hour.” Other than a meeting place, the cryptic call had been cut short. Normally, Fergus would have been put off by the brusque disconnection, but the excitement won over. Months of waiting for Jimmy to complete his mission and bring the rogue wolf to him would finally be over. He’d been starting to worry it might never end. Tying up the loose end would go a long way to easing his nights. Wa
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I haven't forgotten. Jimmy wouldn't recognize the local wolves, so we'll have to have Fergus identify the body, most likely. Hopefully soon. That body is going to start to stink.
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Or it may have been Jimmy being so exhausted, staying up all not worrying and not sleeping that he didn't hear Sawyer walk barefoot through the house.
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These are a lot of good questions, some I hadn't thought about. It can only help to enrich the story depth.
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I'm actually amazed at myself for managing to keep up this pace. I was prepared to do 1k a week with occasional bursts, but my impatience won out. Some days, the chapter a week is hard, although it's not because I've lot interest in the story. Not at all. This will get written and hopefully, written well.
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You're welcome. This was a difficult chapter because the reveal had to happen without being a lame info dump or cliche conversations. It seems to have gone over pretty well.
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**steeples fingers in a malevolant gesture** muahahahahaaaa....
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It's not. LOL
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Now that you've guessed the entire plot line, I'm going to have to change the story and kill everyone without revealing the rogue. I hope you're happy. Everyone. say thank you to Carlos...
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Thank you! I tried to stay true to Sawyer's character once his memory kicked in. He's rational enough to trust what he sees, even if he doesn't like it, especially after coming out.
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I felt like we deserved to end on a happy-ish note after the last few chapters.
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The rogue's identity is coming... I haven't forgotten either.
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Groggy thoughts dipped in sludge clogged Sawyer’s brain. He hadn’t the slightest inkling how he got here, or why his memories were absent. Jimmy had surprised him at the bank, he made it through work, and spent the evening trying to read with no luck, then it all faded out. Blackouts like these usually required a lot of alcohol, yet his stomach was solid and his head didn’t hurt, only dulled. Although, he did feel a little weird. Oddly energized, but somehow sleepy. As if a fine electric cur
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this chapter and the next were very difficult to get down. Certain things had to be included for the future and lay the groundwork for the next act. My goal is to catch more of the typos going from here so it doesn't distract from reading. I've already fixed a few I caught after posting. Messier than usual. Eek.
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Just for that, the story will only become more convoluted without hope of satisfying conclusion. Everyone! Thank Carlos!
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I agree. Fergus needs to stop being a little bitch.
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**Gasp** Torturing characters? Moi?
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Sawyer could use some good luck right about now. Keep your fingers crossed.
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Fergus is too much of a top to suck... Oh... I see where you were going with that...
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Yes.
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The transgressor’s blood dripped between his teeth, an unsavory yet necessary tang in his mouth. “I’m sorry, Jimmy,” Sawyer-mate said. His eyes drifted closed and his body relaxed. The wolf whined, unsure. Saving the Sawyer-mate meant everything, but one sniff confirmed the hurt-oozing was as bad as it looked. Nudging him snout to snout didn’t wake him. Not gone, but not here. Frustration ripped a howl from deep within as a warning to any who might be near. Behind his wolf’s eyes, Ji
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I probably shouldn't say anything about next week's funeral scene, should I? 😮
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It's a major plot point that needed to be huge. It sounds like I hit the intended note.
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It's no spoiler to remind that so far, all the humans bitten we've seen turned into rabids—wild monsters stuck somewhere between human and wolf.
