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Lunch is the next chapter. :Let's hope I can get it sorted by Wednesday morning. Eek!
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I would like to point out the theory of Sawyer's dad being a werewolf was not my idea. Some of you might be disappointed.
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It might be in Jimmy's best interests to get a call from Fergus during lunch. Or to fake one if the whole thing goes south.
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I've always seen divorces, even when they are in everyone's best interests, as a mixed bag of relief and failure. I wanted to show that Jada isn't as fine as she seemed in spite of knowing what was best. Sawyer isn't steel willed, especially in presence to the women in his life. He's been restraining himself for years. It will be a difficult thing to let go of.
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The county courthouse doors swung wide and Sawyer stepped down the short stairwell to the sidewalk, Jada by his side. Fall having set in, the breeze held a slight chill as the season threatened to turn. Midday pedestrians passed each other without words on the sparsely populated street. Staring down at the pavement, Sawyer made an effort not to step on the sidewalk’s seams. No need to invite any bad luck today. “That was easier than I expected.” Jada’s somber exhale mimicked his mood. “A
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Thank you! I really enjoyed this chapter even though I scrambled to finish on time trying to get it right.
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Too late! I'm turning this into a Jerry Springer episode now...
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Wolves have longer lifespans depending on the strength of their bloodlines. Fergus's pack is relatively diluted and weak and therefore live a normal time frame. Fergus and Jimmy seem to be of stronger stock. Now this Fergus-daddy theory running rampant is so trashy and bad, I may write it in just out of spite.
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Hopefully if they ever get to bed, it'll be really nice. Maybe they'll just hold hands.
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again... what the fu...
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Yes... where did this little bit of insanity come from?
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Sometimes it only makes sense to have them go slow.
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uhhh... what the fu...
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Writing a sweet ordinary scene and keep it interesting is always a challenge for me. I like how this turned out.
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There is such a thing as too much angst. (I can't believe I actually said that) I try to keep things somewhat balanced. Somewhat.
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Thanks! I think our boys deserve a chance for a little happiness.
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The wait was killing him, driving invisible arrows deep into his back and chest, leaving him an emotional pincushion. Jimmy had arrived at the restaurant early, having witnessed Sawyer’s penchant for schedules. If he wasn’t careful he was going to wear out the soles in his boots from pacing alone. He kept checking the bus top on the corner in case Sawyer arrived from there, only to call himself stupid each time because her knew Sawyer had a car. An awful, little efficient sedan, but he could
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what she said...
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I think it's to rail against the old code of disfigured/ugly character to signify evil. The prettiest people I've ever met were sometimes the most shallow and mean spirited. Plus, if I make the bad guy hot, you guys will find him more interesting. Because you're all pervs.
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I'm looking forward to sharing where this story goes. There's lots more to come. Buckle up, kids.
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Fergus thinks he can bull his way through anything. Jimmy's dilemma is that he needs a pack to appease his wolf. He's been a stray for far too long and it's stretching his sanity. So far, the appearance of Sawyer has helped, but the bonds of a pack are critical to his mental health. If it falls, he might be lost to his wolf forever.
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I'm doing okay these days. I didn't lose my day job as I worried, but there's enough craziness to make anyone want to dig a hole and jump in from time to time. Writing a chapter each week helps keep me focused, if not stressed when I ride my deadline tighter than planned.
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Great insight and great theories! Let's see how this plays out!
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Fergus's rule is a lot of might makes right and putting himself first. He needs to get his shit together if he wants the pack to follow him blindly.
