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All good questions, some of which I plan to explore in upcoming chapters.
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Good point, I’ll fix it.
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It's not easy at any age. Thanks for commenting.
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You may be right. Stay tuned. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the comment. Leaving the Norwegian Ahnenerbe is a big step for the boys. They need support.
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Good comment. I suspect Matt has other things on his mind other than sex, but things can change quickly with horny 15 year olds.
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** “Ahnenerbe depends on secrecy to survive, and the other branches consider us dangerous,” said Frank. “What do you plan to do?” Emma asked. “We plan to expose them and eliminate them as a risk,” stated Carson. “It will be difficult to convince enforcement agencies of their existence and even more difficult to convince them to take action, but their influence is growing, and we must act soon. They have powerful allies.” ”What can I do to help?” I asked. “Yeah, what
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I think you’re onto something.
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T The young often leap into supporting causes before understanding the repercussions of their actions. They might change their minds when they learn more.
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You may be right. “Eliminate” doesn’t always mean kill, but it might in this case. Thanks for the comment.
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Could be both a government agency and a secret organization. It may depend on how you define government. Thanks for commenting.
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There is more to learn about the Norwegians and the organization they are trying to escape. Thanks for commenting.
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Go to to have a twist now and then. Thanks for the comment. They are a tight group of friend may rise to the challenge. Thanks for the comment.
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** As we were leaving, my mom whispered into my ear. "You certainly have yourself a looker, and he seems very nice. They didn't make boys like that when I was your age. I trust you to be careful, but I expect you to have the time of your life." She kissed me on the cheek, and we left for San Francisco. ** Something strange happened on our way back to the city. I was sitting between Oscar and Jakob in the second row of the SUV. I couldn’t be happier. Frank and Emma sat i
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Thanks for the comment. There will be more revelations in upcoming chapters.
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I think you’re right, but they are both teenagers and it’s hard to predict what will happen. There are the hormones though.
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There’s definitely gamesmanship at play. But to what end?
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You’re always thinking. I can neither confirm nor deny…. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the comment. There are a few surprises in upcoming chapters (I hope).
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Glad you’re picking up on some of the subplots. Thanks for the comment.
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** "They just broke the high school record, and that's after already running two miles!" said Coach Krebs. "Hell, the men's world record is forty-three seconds. I wouldn't be surprised if they threatened that time if they were fresh. Look at them. They aren't even winded. They're astonishing." Coach Krebs was so excited I was afraid he'd pee his pants. We watched the four boys run toward Lake Merced to log more miles. I thought, 'Who are these guys!' ** Friday, in the seco
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I’m glad someone noticed. It’s easier to write about something I know.
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Matt wants to find out if the stamina translates to the bedroom. Thanks for the comment.
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Lol, not were I was going, but might make a great alternative ending!
