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  1. knotme

    DD Rant

    Dom, I've thoroughly enjoyed everything on your hosting page, possibly except for the dog thing. I applaud your determination to keep a few chapters ahead. Outlines are great, but sometimes writing ahead is the only way to avoid dead ends or soft patches. Your combination of quality and quantity is breathtaking and, ironically, may be the reason your tormentors bother. So go ahead, write what you want, when you want, and noli nothis permittere te terere. * Tom * AKA "illegitimi non carborundum". Ugh.
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    The substitute

    This beginning could make for a great story.
  3. I kinda like the new version of TLW_1. No more "anyways". If Dom wants to say "anyways", that's cool, but I'm pretty sure that Owen prefers "anyway". I know it's Dom's storey, but I see it as Owen's story, because he's speaking. "Anyway" sounds like Owen; "anyways" doesn't.
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