Gary, maybe its just me but I don't think i get as clear a sense of the passage of time within your story. It came to me as a possible reason for me perceiving that this chapter was short. I dont know. It was just definitely surprising how short it felt given how many words I see you using.
BY NO MEANS do I intend to imply that this was a bad chapter. I Loved it, you and all the rainbows and sunshine that comes out of my ass when I think about these people and this story on a whole lol ^^ Just putting what I felt out there
What would life be without people like you, eh Gary? You're part of the stuff of life that everyone describes help make this world interesting. You're a gem and like that "dust" in this story, you are a very life giving aspect of this world we live in. Thank you man.
Mace and Dane the new Earth Mates! Yay! But REALLY, nice chapter man. With respect, just wish they didn't feel like snippets given the potential scope of this story. <3
... mister =.= I want you to ride this rocket ship of encouragement, love and enthusiasm yuh hear? If any lack of confidence wants to creep in, drown it out with the voices of these people along with mine. These characters now have a life of their own and are just ripe and ready to have their stories told... and its going to be GREAT \o/
.. I have seriously come to the conclusion that when stories touch readers like this and many others have, regardless of the fictional nature of the story, they are in fact a valid, very real experience. I sincerely, solemnly thank you for having weaved this so masterfully into the fabric of my life Wolf.
Smh, this story has touched my heart and now its ending already. Time to light my little candle for all the wonderful emotions I've experienced through this ..lol
I love you, but you're killing me. I hope that we will get to the beautifulk things again soon enough please. I hope they can move on relatively soon. The euphoric parts of this story seemed so fleeting compared with this whole press shit-storm thats going on I hope it doesnt last so long to get to the lighter times again. Ultimately I respect your own pacing. This story is really riveting.