milotin

Thanks for posting another chapter. I wonder what the tension is between Mike, David and Kyle. Is Mike jealous of Kyle? I guess we'll see in the end. I'm also wondering what will happen now that David and Kyle have a day together. Will they finally get intimate? I look forward to the next instalment!

Really enjoying this story - I love watching the relationship between Kyle and David unfold. I can't wait to see what the overseas trip brings. Thanks for writing, and keep up the great work!

Wow - what progress, yet, as the other reviewers have noted, Billy's left a whole lot of potential to hurt and disappoint Brandon some more. Why, oh why, did he have to lie again? The other thing that baffles me is why Billy can't come clean about the real reasons he cheated on Brandon with Bobby. Sure, it doesn't make it any better, but if he actually told Brandon that Bobby said he'd refuse access to his home (for Billy to be with Brandon) unless Bobby got sexual favours from Billy… wouldn't it have at least helped Brandon understand why? Billy hadn't forgotten about Brandon; in fact, he was cheating in order to get to spend more time with him. I wonder if he'll ever come clean about that, too. Wonderful story - thanks for the twists and turns. I just home there's some smooth sailing ahead, but it seems perhaps not! Cheers, Milo

Thanks for another chapter. It may seem like not a lot is happening, in that the chapter is not very eventful, but I really enjoy the way we get to see all the thought processes going on in Kyle's head. It's very easy to relate to. It seems he wants a lot more from David, but maybe he doesn't know that himself just yet. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. :-)

Just thought I would stop by to say thanks for writing this. I'm really enjoying watching the story unfold - it's easy to relate to the characters and their emotional ups and downs as they navigate their various relationships. Also, I love the way you write. Thanks again. :-)

Just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this epic story. I love the way you're growing and sharing Billy - the way he changes as a person as he experiences the ups and downs of life. The detail and the genuineness makes the reader feel like they're really inside his head, and it's all so easy to relate to. You obviously put a lot in to developing the story, and writing it - thank you very much, because it's a joy to read. Looking forward to the next instalment - and to seeing if Billy can ever find the true inner happiness that he's craving. Cheers M.