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Chapter 15 - Strained Relations
Daithi commented on Fitz's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Strained Relations
LOL I loved Zach's explanation of him not wanting to " dent his associates. A day he didn't want to break". That was priceless and I can see a four hear old twisting it around to get that meaning for accident. And after reading about the conditions he has to live in that bit of humour was perfect to finish a sad chapter. -
Chapter 12 - Group Therapy, Part II
Daithi commented on Fitz's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Group Therapy, Part II
The last chapter had me in tears especially after listing to Halo but this chapter had me laughing and crying. This story has been very eye opening to me, I've not lost a partner but I have lost a brother similar to how Tom lost his. He was older than I was so it's not the same as losing a twin and it was many many years ago but I still see him in a personal movements ot same hair colour. I think I would have appreciated reading this story when I lost him but I'm still finding the path that Tom, Sarah, Scott and Noah are traveling. Thank you -
Don't think it's coincidence that Adrian gives the card back to Alexis just a few hours after seeing Lily meet Taka. And that poor me while you have all the money ducks. Hope they stick it Adrian and he doesn't get let off the hook. He stole tens of thousands of dollars with no way to pay it back he needs go be put in jail just like any other thief
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I don't like Adrian he's a mooch and something tells me he has something to do with the missing palladium card. I hope not simply cause it will hurt Alexis but we will see.
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LOL how are you supposed to know if Adrian is a cutie or not he's never around. But I bet Mr. Electric Blues Eyes is a hottie.
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And beautiful story, but to short. I liked that there were main characters but when I thought about it there really wasn't. Yes it was told thru Ray but everyone had a main part and they just flowed from their part to the next one. It was very beautiful and I look forward to reading more from you.
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Wow loved this story the details were great. I hope that the "?" after the end means that at some point in the near future there will be a sequel, to the story. looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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LOL there are blue balls then in the case of the guys BLUE BALLS hehe poor guys.. Enjoying the story, laughing at all the interruptions
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I get a bit confused periodically but am enjoying the story
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Very nice chapter. I like the way that as much as the boys want there union blessed by the church they in no way want to harm the duration of Father Howard or the church itself. Keep up the great writing!!
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Oooo now the fun begins can't wait
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Hmm aren't Govenor's supposed to be reasonably intelligent. I think that one slipped the noose a bit lol.
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Thank you for continuing the story. I hope it proves to be as entertaining and delightful as book 1
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Thank you for the beautiful story. It wasn't a mushy goody goody happy story. There was a lot of heartbreak in it , some surprising turns. Other than the breakup and yes in the long run it did turn out maybe not for the best since Sarah did lose her life and both men had to deal with a lot of pain. But there is now another Matt and Mike in the family and hopefully the two men can overcome pains do get and stay together. Am really looking forward to book 2.
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I have to admit I didn't like that chapter, yes it was well written but very sad. Thankfully it was near the end of the story or odds are in wouldn't want to finish it.
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Really enjoying the story can't wait to read the rest of it. The jokes are hilarious and the poems are beautiful.
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I like the way the story is progressing but I hope the new change in the relationship isn't due to the crap with Rick
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Interesting. Kinda confusing keeping who is who straight with the names being so close but I think I'm going to enjoy this story
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Awww that just doesn't seem the right ending. This is one time I would rather Rover not keep his feet on the ground. Please tell me that there is a sequel where Slade comes back for Rover!!. It can't end like this noooooooooo.
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Well on a good note he didn't run but ouch that had to hurt. Thank god for Slade!!
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Ugh crap....didn't see that coming, where the heck did they come from
