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I'm glad it was D'kov that won the challenge and not his brother. Thought do wonder if there was a reason why there weren't more challenges if D'kov and S'flin had something to do with that. Great chapter looking forward to the rest of the story.

Haha I liked when liliath tossed the thief between her front legs. poor grandfather think he got more than he bargained for on that flight. I had never read any of the original books but after reading this I think it's time to hit my local library in town to see what I've been missing

Hmm they expected to work on their free days bjt not quite this way I don't think it...at least they will be able to show H'mal that he was right to put his trust in them....I hope it all works out!

I see N'sor's plan backfired on him once again. Hopefully he learns first time around but I doubt it.

Hmm having my dad or me school principal show me the ropes of having sex is just a little weird. I remember my school principals... And yeah that wouldn't be happening in my world..lmao

I hope book 2 starts soon I can't wait to see how the two men get their sons backs and hopefully annihilated some earthers at the same time. What a way to end the book ,the brothers did everything for the republic and they freed Calos. For what to lose almost everything they loved, there wives and there sons. The Republic and even Calos better stand behind them to get there sons back.

Poor Danny what a lower for a father cares more about losing face with his friends than his own son. It's pretty bad when you need a warrant to be able to get clothes for Danny, hope those charges stick for the father he deserves them.

And lot going on in this chapter between Scott and Noah, also Scott had some things to work out about Steve as well. Then Zach threw in a few surprises as well. I think the guys are finding out a bit at a time that Zach is a little boy and that he is usually sweet and lovable, little boys are not likely that all the time. Yes some of it could have been from the night before but. Boys well be boys this will prolly not be the first time he acts out hopefully the men handle it as well as they did this time

Talk about a vacation hehe. Felt bad leaving Abigail down in Florida I think she would have fit in on the ranch. Thought there would be more comments on Jessie being English rider rather than cowboy but then with all the surprises I can see how it would have sorta got lost in there. I'm glad Jessie and Dylan are getting together but now Ace has no one straight or not he needs a partner too

I hope you continue the second book I want to see the two boys reunited. I found this chapter very hard to read with all the symbols and what have you hope the rest aren't lime that.

And beautiful story can't wait to read there's of it. I'm enjoying the innocence of Kaleb, though I don't know if that is the right word. I think the thing that stands out the most when I read is everyone keeps asking what does Chase see in Kaleb but twice now Chase has asked himself what does Kaleb see in Chase. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

This has been a different story and I really enjoyed it. I like the final definition of 'home' it is so true. I started reading by fluke and by the second chapter I was well and truly caught. Then when you brought Ireland into it I couldn't put it down until I was done, that made a really good story truly awesome (bit biased being of irish decent lol). Ty for an awesome read keep up the excellent work

Beautiful!!

Thank you for the sneak peak. The innocence in the children was a pleasure to read and to see just that spark of it in the guys as well even after a couple decades. Hopefully there will a bit longer sneak peak at a later date to see if they did adopt anf to see how they manage with their teenagers.

Haha so Jesse gets two dad's and a brother all in a couple of weeks. Hmm interesting to see how they are getting Kaya to the farm and whatcha bet Val will be listed in in a new state soon too . Can't wait to see what happens.

Awesome date, I like the way they made it their own. It was a night of fun and learning about each other. With everything that had happened between the men I, between the end of a partnership to being full time fathers they have ran the full gamut but we're still able to have a first date that started them on the road to their memories. Can't wait to read on

Thank you for a beautiful story. It had me running the full gamut of emotions. Story was too short but the ending was perfect

Why!! I know the saying strength builds character. Why do people realize after the fact of group abuse that hey maybe it was wrong. And why do people actually figure it's good to talk about it. In this case proving them wrong can be satisfying and will earn confidence but wouldn't it have been better to learn confidence in yourself for yourself rather than having to provide excellent to other people your worth it. But it is a good story even if I spend most of my time with tears flowing down my face.

Spent the first 16 chapters in tears, but through last 7more than mad jp for it. Would liked to have seen more punishment for the father and the brother. 15 years was definitely not enough. But I like the fact that with enough love and strength miracles do happen, and Shane is one he'll of a miracle to not only survive. Beyond death, suicide but to come out in the end stronger, but also warm, caring and still have a huge heart. Only problem its was to short wanted more chapters hehe

Looking back and thinking back thru the chapters, yes the guys made a few bad decision keeping stuff from their parents. Even with their reasoning of why, it seems more go methat the parents had. Ireland problems accepting and adapting. To a boy of what was it 5-6 being told he will lose his sight then losing it again 13, then gaining it back At 18 then because of a drunk losing basically half of that new sight after only a couple of months. The strength of cha factors of both Zeek and Jake I think is pretty extraordinary and to top it off going thru that while coming out to parents and high school. I enjoyed this story, though having that accident so close to finally gaining his sight back really sucked couldn't you have at least let him have a year with full sight lol.

I'm glad Zak is fine. But oooh its getting interesting. Between the crap that Matty and CJ's family is wanting to start up, CJ's possible new child. It should be interesting. That a day now see have Ace and Dylan still single. Hehe please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

Oh My God. I think we flu do out why the connection between Zak and Angel. Hope the shock won't hurt Kate too much.

So sad to have the start of everything, then to lose it all in just a few months. But he has Kaya which though a dog is the last thing he has of Seb. I hope things smooth out for him and he can be happy again. Fifteen is really too young to taste happiness than lose it all.

After reading up to chapter25 in Moving On it was actually nice to read this Christmas Story of early times with Scott and Steve. Even though it is taken from a time even before they were married it really gives you incite as to how close the two men were and why it took over a year for Scott to come to terms with Steves death. Though knowing what happens just over a decade later does make the last line or so very heartbreaking to read. But thank you for giving us a glimpse of the love and closeness they shared.

Excellent chapter love the aquarium hehe. Can't wait to read about the date hopefully it won't be a long wait for the chapter.