Looks like an interesting story.
From the first two chapters I don't really like Jared. And poor Darwin. Cant wait to read the next chapter, please update soon
Oh, why do ppl enjoy ending chapters with cliffhangers?
But it looks like a really good story, could maybe use a bit of editing but story wise I really like it. Keep up the good work and I hope you can update soon
I started reading this when you first published it on AFF, can't wait to read the edited version and find out what happens.
Thank you for sharing your story here.
Will you put your other stories here too?
So far I really like this story. I can't wait to see what will happen next. So far the only way to make this story better would be if you updated more often , but its worth the wait