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It's Not Goodbye, Without a Kiss
Xfighter1984 commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in It's Not Goodbye, Without a Kiss
Please there is more for these two soon. Of all the characters in this setting I think I’ve fallen the most in love with Ace and Leo 😭 -
Chapter 17: An explosion! Who will rise and who will fall?
Xfighter1984 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17: An explosion! Who will rise and who will fall?
This chapter…it was heavy it took my breath away…so much so words escape me I can only wait for the next installment. Amazing storytelling as always I reserve the rest of my thoughts until I see this play out -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Xfighter1984 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
There was so much going on in this chapter these cliffhangers are brutal…now what could Matteo be up too…is it possible Matteo got pregnant(since Noah was able too) and he thinks that will lock him and Jace together? -
Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
Xfighter1984 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
My heart breaks for the devastation awaiting Noah…betrayed not only by his husband but his best friend, along with big I told you so from his father….sigh…he may turn out to become the same cold man his father seemed to be…Jace and Matteo how I detest them both for playing in Noah’s face, who never asked for any of this -
Chapter 10: Trouble in paradise
Xfighter1984 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Trouble in paradise
I feel like Gael isn’t getting nearly as much grace as he gave Alex, who basically had Leo’s tongue down his throat right in front a Gael who had a one second kiss with Carlos…I hope they find some way to fix it but it’s seems like Alex might be projecting a bit. I’m always ready for more by the end 😭 can’t wait for the next chapter. -
Dark-like flames swirled and danced within his hands before being snuffed out in an instant. A toothy smile spread across Urien’s face as his abilities continued to grow and reach new heights. “Urien, come with me,” Mordred growled. Urien shrugged, eager to see what this was all about. He had been keeping tabs on Mordred and was frustrated at the realization that he fully mastered the dark powers he absorbed from his mistress. “It would seem as though they have begun to make their move and the n
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Mordred stalked through the dark hallways; a permanent smile etched across his face. He used his time to familiarize himself with the presence of darkness within his soul. There had been fleeting moments where it felt as though the soul of his late mistress remained intact and seeking release, but those moments had since grown fewer in frequency as his power grew. Mordred flexed his claw watching Urien move about from the corner of his eye, he was all too aware that the young dragon posed a seri
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“I think we should talk,” Felix felt like the world was moving in slow motion as he watched Austin take a seat across from him. “I’m sure you have no sympathy for my situation, but if it makes you feel any better, I didn’t know anything more than you were an ex left behind in the move,” Felix remained quiet and still as Austin moved about in his chair while fidgeting with silverware. “We met at a work conference, his company was pitching a big merger,” Austin paused, caught up in the emotion of
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Jin looked out into the expanse of the dark sky. It had been nearly a month since he had been in the presence of his mate; if not for the connection they shared, he would no doubt have succumbed to sorrow and loss. The night sky was filled with the sounds of reconstruction as the citizenry and warriors came together to restore their great kingdom and honor those lost on the day that many began to call, “The day of black flames.” “Hurry back my jewel, the people need us both, and I am
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Years and it all went up in smoke. Felix flew to California to surprise Terrance after being awarded his long sought-after promotion. The separation was tough, but once he got the promotion, he could finally move out to California, no quick fly-by-night weekends. “Terrance, baby I did it, I finally made it to senior account manager and can relocate to the LA office,” Felix proudly announced as he swung open the bedroom door. “Oh, shit Felix,”
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Felix tapped his pen against his desk, listening to the presenter drone on about useless numbers and data. When he finally had enough, he pushed himself away from his desk, taking his tablet with him as the virtual presentation continued. After finally getting settled in LA, Felix was elated when he was offered to work remotely, which coupled with his spending more time than ever engaged in personal fitness, turned out to be an ideal combination. Felix called Ben. “Shouldn't you be w
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Will Felix succumb to the surrounding flames of his life, or will he rise from the ashes like the phoenix born again?
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“You should be removed from the throne and spend the rest of your days locked away in the dungeons. This is a result of the reckless actions of Red Wyverns. You lust for war and destruction; now, we must all suffer.” The council wasted little time in calling an emergency session once it was clear Morgana had no intentions of an immediate return. “Now, we are left in even more peril with your so-called warriors left battered, bruised, and even mentally shocked. Above all else, you have locked the
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Mordred was thrown off balance by the unexpected explosion. Vicky took advantage of the opportunity to escape from his grip and make her way to Merlin and Sage. His quarry momentarily forgotten as Mordred's focus shifted to the direction of the explosion where his mistress and the young heir were doing battle. Figures began to appear as the hail of debris dispersed, but Mordred’s grew concerned as the red wyvern stepped forward brandishing his troublesome blade. Morgana was less than pleased wit
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Mordred paced back and forth, lost in his thoughts, he barely heeded Urien any attention. His mistress was growing in power and desire; her grand plans were moving along faster than he thought was appropriate, but he knew better than to question her again. Mordred flexed his claw recalling the last time he decided to question her methods. Mordred returned to his senses when Urien made himself known through a throat clearing. “It would seem Lady Morgana is ready for the next phase of
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“Are being serious with me right now?” Bastion asked, falling into bed and pulling Sage down with him. “The little bird is going up against that,” Sage sighed moving until he felt Bastion’s chest against his back. Even he had a hard time believing such an event was going to occur. He had been right there with Levi when Sune popped in with the highly unusual request. “Maybe there is a trick behind those silky feathers that we have yet to see,” Sage yelled as Bastion flipped them over
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“Ah, my son has returned from his Capitol errand. Tell me, has our time come to end this trivial squabble over the throne and take our rightful place to lead our people forward?” Zephyr glared at his father as he listened to the foolish words spilling from his mouth. “You have allowed me to make an utter fool of myself,” Zephyr spat, watching his parents recoil in shock. “Why did we sit idle when such peril was inflicted upon our people?” He clicked his teeth as his father avoided hi
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Alexander groaned as he slowly awakened and took in his surroundings. He began to panic, realizing that he was no longer in his hotel room. The last thing that he could remember was chatting with a hot stranger at the bar as he continued his attempt to avoid the three hot men who caused him to soak his shorts in sexual excitement. Alexander felt his heart rate increase when he discovered that he was not only in unfamiliar territory but also bound and gagged to a chair in the center of a small ro
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“Anything you need from us, you know we will always see you as the little boss, remember that.” a young Jasper nodded his head trying to hold back the tears as they lowered his father’s casket. He knew from this day forward he had to be strong, had to be the best he could be for his sake as well as his mom’s. “The chief always ensured you were away from the business, everything is taken care of, it is for the best you and Jas get to leave this place behind, but remember Tri
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“You brought me here for a reason, some birthright I am supposed to lay claim to. I’ll accept this name you’ve been calling me, show me what it is I need to do,” Morgana couldn’t help but smile as this boy stood before herself and Mordred. “What makes you think you can begin making demands now,” Mordred questioned, looking down at that boy who but weeks ago would all but shrink before him. “If you meant for me to perish you would have done so long ago, with that being said I can on
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As difficult of a chapter this was, it reflects how light of life can be extinguished in an instance. These events hit close to home and are deeply impactful and meaningful to readers especially those of us in the black community to have our stories told and voices heard. Thank you so much keep up the good work
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“You got me all to yourself, now, lay it all out there. What is bouncing around in that shiny head of yours?” Sune questioned as he sat with legs crossed atop a rock. “I am outside of my element amongst this inner circle of yours; sadly, even those knights that hang around seem to be operating on a level I have yet to reach.” Sune studied the dragon below him as he contemplated his response. “I have a neat little trick to show you, which is something that I picked up fair
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Mordred watched the boy from afar. His mother hid him well almost in plain sight. He was so close but far from his true destiny, yet he knew nothing. Mordred smiled to himself; perhaps things would be that much simpler; however, he needed to gather his thoughts on the matter at hand. The color drained from the woman’s face as she stared up at her visitor from the open door. It had been years since she was visited by these creatures; something she hoped would never come to be. “You c
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“Take me with you, I'm stronger now and with each passing day I understand more and more about my abilities,” Sune exclaimed. Walking through the gardens with his best friend Sune pleaded his case to follow his best friend to the ends of the earth. “The Kingdom needs you here, Jin needs you here,” Levi held Sune’s hands within his own, smiling at his dear friend. “My mate will never admit it, but having you leave the Kingdom as well would make him feel even more unease than he
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“I do not like it,” Jin scowled before turning his back to his mate. “Why does it always have to be you? Why do you have to be the one to jump headfirst into danger? I am the king, so I am supposed to be the one who protects the kingdom.” Levi wrapped his arms around Jin, turning him around to face him and planting soft kisses on his mate. “You are the king. I know that you know that, and the elders and council need to know that as well, but this is something I must do to be ready t
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