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Albert1434

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  1. Ok god I had Kidney Stones and three surgeries they finale fix me so I do not get stones any more thank god! And the funny thing is that my last doctor his name was DR. Good!
  2. 10 Most Read Adventure in the last month are: Circumnavigation by C James Peace of Amiens by Mark Arbour The Prisoner of Carronne by Mark Ponyboy Peters Noah's Adventure by AquariusGuy Knight and Squire by Albert1434 Medellín by LittleBuddhaTW Pigsty by Jack Poignet Let the Music Play by C James Country Retreat by quokka The Case of the Short, Short Prince by Geron Kees
  3. Albert1434

    Chapter 20

    The Hammer and the Rock all hinges on Dover!
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 20

    Thank you for diving so deeply into this chapter’s revelations. Kaylen’s discovery at Wynthorpe marks a turning point, and you’ve captured the tension perfectly. The Heart of Fen stone is far more than a relic—it’s an ancient force tied to the land’s very lifeblood, and the powers it reveals in the battles ahead will challenge every oath sworn and every alliance made. As the truth behind Prince Louis’s ambitions comes to light, the stone’s dormant abilities will begin to stir. Its influence over the land, its people, and even the will of those who dare to wield it will shape the storm that’s gathering. Both sides have claimed their resolve, but the Heart of Fen has a will of its own, and the coming conflict will show just how deeply its power runs. The path forward is dark, charged, and full of consequence—exactly the kind of storm that forges legends. Sorry with slow to answer you because I went to the eye doctor today.
  5. I when for my yearly eye examine the doctor dilated my eyes and I can hardly see. lol
  6. Tonight, for dinner I am making 😃 Sous Vide Hoisin-Glazed Pork Chops with coconut rice and corn!
  7. Albert1434

    Chapter 20

    Kaylen loves to annoy Louis
  8. Albert1434

    Chapter 20

    Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! I’m thrilled you picked up on the tension surrounding the Keep and the marshmen’s role in the battle. The Heart of the Fen is such a powerful symbol in this world—both mystical and deeply personal to those bound to it—and Prince Louis’ obsession with it only raises the stakes further. Kaylen and the Baron’s decision to move the relic was risky, but necessary, and the Prince’s fury at losing track of it sets the stage for exactly the kind of brutal confrontation you mentioned. Tomorrow’s battle will test every alliance, every oath, and every ounce of courage they have left. I’m glad the intensity of this moment resonated with you. There’s much more to come.
  9. Gary are you including yourself in this reprobates statement?
  10. I saw this and thought Drew would enjoy this!
  11. Knight and Squire The Heart of the Fen Stirs Dawn broke pale and thin over Wynthorpe, the light struggling through a sky still heavy with storm‑clouds. The village stirred like a wounded beast — slowly, painfully, but with a stubborn will to rise. Men tightened straps, checked bowstrings, and took their places along the palisade. The air smelled of wet earth and smoke. Kaylen stood upon the walkway above the gate, cloak snapping in the wind. Ronan and Tomas flank
  12. A tropical cyclone warning is in place from Whim Creek to Jurien Bay, including Karratha, Onslow, Exmouth, Coral Bay, Carnarvon, Denham and Geraldton, and extending to inland to Pannawonica and Murchison. We also have a severe weather warning extending further inland,” Ms Cherny said.
  13. Dash Crofts, Seals & Crofts musician, dies at 87
  14. Spike will not be on for the next 3 days or so dealing with all the beef!
  15. Snakewich with Venom Sauce
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