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  1. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    I agree with you drsawzall !
  2. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Thank you so much for this thoughtful reflection. You captured the heart of what these young men are facing—the weight of duty at an age when most would still be finding their footing, and the resilience required to rise through a harsh and demanding world. Ronan and Tomas are indeed learning not only the craft expected of them, but also what it means to stand beside someone they trust with their whole being. As for the summons… your instincts are sharp. In times like these, a call from higher authority rarely comes without purpose. Whether it signals opportunity, danger, or a shift in the balance of power is something they’ll have to discover step by step.
  3. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Thank you so much for the thoughtful words. Kaylen is doing his best to guide his squires toward the men they’re meant to become, even as the world around them watches every step they take. Their bond—with him and with each other—will only deepen as their roles grow heavier. I’m really glad this chapter resonated with you and that you’re enjoying the journey so far.
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Wait and see
  5. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this chapter. The boys’ training is shaping them in body and spirit, but this moment between them marks a different kind of growth—one that neither Kaylen nor the steward can teach. Their first kiss is a quiet turning point, a step into deeper commitment and vulnerability. I’m glad that came through for you, and I appreciate you following their journey so closely.
  6. Aloha Duglas how are you today😁
  7. Kight and Squire Two Hearts The mist had not yet lifted from the stones when the boys gathered in the yard. Their wooden swords were nicked and scarred from use, their tunics patched at the elbows, but their eyes were bright with the restless energy of youth. Kaylen stood before them, not armored, not robed, but plain in a linen tunic, sleeves rolled to the elbow. His presence was enough. He did not need to raise his voice; the boys stilled when he looked at them
  8. This could easily mess up their life big time.
  9. Wow Clo unbelievable jezz! I knew there was a reason I did not go into teaching! ☹️
  10. I know how that is been there done that!
  11. Just take your time Gary and it will be good!
  12. Albert1434

    Chapter 4

    Thank you for such a thoughtful review. This chapter was meant to highlight exactly that tension—how the Church’s authority could be both a shield and a snare, and how a man like Kaylen must navigate its power with care. His only real defense was to meet the accusation on the Church’s own terms, and you captured that perfectly. The duel was never just about steel; it was about truth, reputation, and the example he sets for the two young men watching him. His choice to show mercy was deliberate—strength tempered by restraint speaks louder than any victory. I’m glad that moment resonated with you. Thank you again for reading and sharing your insight.
  13. Tonight were having for dinner Chimichurri Chicken & Veggie Wraps with tzatziki sauce.
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