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  1. Miles Long

    Chapter 23

    Nice insight to the head honcho. Thanks as always.
  2. Miles Long

    Chapter 22

    I think that not seeing one another is a shitty idea, if anyone is wondering . Enjoying the story, thanks.
  3. Miles Long

    Chapter 21

    Bruce did this intentionally. Bastard! Thanks for the gripping drama, it's fantastic!
  4. Miles Long

    Chapter 20

    Bruce is playing dirty, setting Robert up for failure. Excellent work creating a super villian. Thanks as always for the work.
  5. Miles Long

    Chapter 19

    Ran out of likes again! Great work, thanks.
  6. Miles Long

    Chapter 18

    The chemistry is so playful, it's not burning unrequited love passion, rather a smoldering sweetness. Great job, thanks.
  7. Miles Long

    Chapter 17

    The universe (played by Topher Lydon) wants Will and Marc to connect. Why fight it Marc ? Thanks.
  8. Miles Long

    Chapter 16

    I'm positive Will is not going to like what he finds. Top notch work, thanks.
  9. Miles Long

    Chapter 15

    No, no, no, that's not a sound plan. You don't love Libbet Marc, that doesn't mean you don't deserve to be happy. Fine work, thanks.
  10. Miles Long

    Chapter 14

    Marc's a character just as idiosyncratic as Will only in an entirely different way. Good job, thanks.
  11. Miles Long

    Chapter 13

    I'm glad neither of them stood the other up. I think they both could benefit from time spent. Nice work, thanks.
  12. Miles Long

    Chapter 12

    This is looking to be very dirty dealings. Curiosity working overtime, thanks.
  13. Miles Long

    Chapter 11

    Marc, I gotta believe you are more than that...as for the local guy is his name Jon or Lucas? Small detail in an otherwise compelling chapter. Thanks.
  14. Miles Long

    Chapter 10

    All things fade to black in the presence of goals. Glad to read that Will has finally embraced hockey. Thanks as always.
  15. Miles Long

    Chapter 9

    I foresee a hostile takeover, just not the one Avery assumes. The intrigue is starting to get exciting, thanks.
  16. Miles Long

    Chapter 8

    Marc's a subtle stalker, but very clever to track Will down via work. Bruce he's going to be a lot of trouble. Thanks again for the story.
  17. Miles Long

    Chapter 7

    Although he is away from Libbet he is still beholden to her and that us an uncomfortable place to be...I'm enjoying the new character you've introduced, thanks.
  18. Miles Long

    Chapter 6

    Bruce just exudes shade...yikes. It's times like this that Will can leverage his childhood to his advantage. Good job, thanks.
  19. Miles Long

    Chapter 5

    Ah Brody, one day you'll meet your match. Thanks for the work.
  20. Miles Long

    Chapter 4

    Lisa's preggers! Wow has she done a 180 from her cold feet days. Nice work, thanks.
  21. Miles Long

    Chapter 3

    Will still pines for Andrew but I wonder if Andrew has really moved on or does he pine for Will too? Nice interchange between Will and Marc...there is definitely a there there. Thanks.
  22. Miles Long

    Chapter 2

    I had completely forgotten about Marc. Great introduction, thanks.
  23. Miles Long

    Chapter 1

    Promising start to another Carter story. Thank you for your creativity.
  24. Miles Long

    Chapter 23

    Another abrupt ending, which wouldn't be bad but I am disappointed in both Andrew and Will's lack of willingness to actually sort shit out before breaking up. I expected more, better.
  25. Miles Long

    Chapter 22

    I'm not as familiar with Canadian employment laws but this is another situation that stretches the limits of believability, no one working for a call center gets less than 24 hour notice to move to another county let alone another country. Phony donations are not matters of national security, or public policy. And Andrew, who appears to be acting completely out of character from the first three books deserves to lose Will with the way he's acting. And wasn't Will's bosses last name Weippert in chapter 18 and now it's Andersen?
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