Miles Long
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Not that this wasn't a poignant scenes that choked me up but this whole situation feels forced. Andrew is GAAAAAY; even if he doesn't want to be with Carter he's not going to hook up with Jeff's slutty sister. I get that tension has been building up with Andrew but this has all been so rushed and feels more contrived than organic almost a vehicle for Brody's witty quips than anything else.
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Andrew really is a dolt.
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Will is like a super hero...Super Friend saving the day over and over again. Someone should get him a cape.
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I do have to admit this all over the place story does lend itself well to accentuating the chaotic feel of a wedding. Kudos on that.
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Why is Andrew getting wrapped up in the issues of some girl that he doesn't even know? It's not that I think anything happened, I just don't get Andrew's actions.
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Hmm...not the best way to end the night, but not entirely surprising. Why is it the assholes come out telling people to leave when they are already going?
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Wow one friend imposes on him, another doses him and his boyfriend stands him up...no wonder he's leaving.
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Hmm, the plausibility of some of these situations is pushing the limits. It's not that it's not entertaining it's just all over the place.
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This whole thing is just too chaotic, and to miss a playoff game? Jesus I'm stressed out.
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Why does Will think Andrew's straight with an exception? Andrew seems solidly accepting of himself as a gay man. This is what happens when Will is left to stew in his own thoughts.
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Yikes...girls like that give women a bad name. Andrew's blowing it leaving Carter to stew in his own thoughts. Great work creating chaos, thanks.
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Wow Jeff is kind of a jerk to just drop his family onto Will with no notice. Thanks for the work.
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Purposeful choice ending chapters 8 & 9 the same?
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It's not like Andrew to be so clueless. Looking forward to the rest, thanks.
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How did will actually fall into such a shitty job? Kudos on accurately capturing the dismal environs of a call center, the only thing missing is the stained carpet .
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Oh my what kind of tux would Jeff pick? Interesting chapter, thanks.
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Odd how people will settle for the misery they know versus the chance at happiness.
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Ah the clouds are parting and I starting to see the sun. Thanks for the chapter.
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I'm still a bit disoriented, but decided to let the past go and roll with this reality. Bummed about the pending trouble in paradise but grateful for the continuation of the story.
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Chapter Eleven: The Cold Light of Morning
Miles Long commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Eleven: The Cold Light of Morning
I still think Stuart's on the functioning side of the spectrum and I wonder weather or not he's a sneak. As always great work, thanks. -
Montgomery is in for a whole host of changes now that Colton has mated him. Brilliant chapter, thanks.
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I'm impressed how eyes wide open Will is about Zach; his motivation is pretty sound, Zach makes him happy and until Zach proves otherwise he going to cut Zach slack. I do hope Brent is wrong though, although I do appreciate Gathan's more thoughtful approach and I believe he cares for Will. Good for Wade for prioritizing his needs first, unconditional love isn't letting someone walk all over you. Matt has a long, hard road ahead if he wants to try and repair his rift with Wade and the rest of the family. Is it wrong to take so much pleasure in Tony's exile ? I'm all over the place because the story is just too freaking good. Thank you again for your fabulous work.
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The timing of this seems off based off Peter's age. Is this before or after the last story?
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Where the hell is Will going?
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Peter really is a little Will . Achingly lovely ending to a beautiful story, thank you.
