Miles Long
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I'm pining away for simpler days for all our heroes. Really good work, thanks.
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This feels like a good fit for Andrew, making a difference rather than a dollar.
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Wait Tyler seems nice and all but West is back in town, and. . . Thanks for the work.
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Rough first day, but no doubt West will push himself and his team to do better. Thanks.
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How cathartic and difficult it must be to hear about one's father's death. Thanks for providing this insight.
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Why I have no lines is a mystery but know I love the fact that West is back! Incredible start to the final book. Thanks.
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Andrew is better utilized working for good rather than money. Will saved the day honoring his late mentor and late father. Nice wrap up. Thanks.
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I love how sneaky you made Will. Thanks for the work.
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Excellent debate tactic, and Will will figure it out...he's Super Will!
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Marc truly is a unique guy. This business with Andrew though...tsk, tsk, tsk.
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Wow a proposal. Wow.
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Playful interaction between Will and his soon to be peers. Nice work, thanks.
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Shady politics even in Canada? My faith is lost .
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Knowing how prudish Will is I struggle with how damaging these pictures could actually be...good for him though going for the office. Thanks.
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Good gawd, the funeral isn't even over. Gripping chapter, thanks.
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No! (SPOILER ALERT!) Robert can't be dead!
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Will's life is set to chaos with one tragic phone call and one inappropriate kiss. Great work, thanks.
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Love is freaking complicated.
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Thunderous applause for another fantastic chapter Mark Arbour! As I was procrastinating my to do list I wondered if the whole Brent comment was something like that. Zach seems to be very good at manipulating people's poor opinion of him to his advantage. There's a lot more to him and being with Will is likely going to be a huge challenge to his resolve about his current priorities. Brilliant work, thanks.
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Marc now is not the time to fall back on back self effacing habits. As for you Andrew how important is a love you were so unwilling to fight for when the chance to make a difference was there? Argh I'm completely embroiled in make believe !
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Hmm...moving revisit to Major Carter's funeral, but it does bring up some consistency questions that I have been trying to ignore like in chapter 12 Peter being bashful about being gay in front of Andrew? Andrew was West's coach and around for Pete's poignant 1st/Last date with him. It's not as impactful/distracting as it was in book four Carter's Duty, but still my investment into the story forces me to bring it up. Aside from that nice intrigue, thanks.
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Colton's devil may care attitude is kind of addicting. Nice work, thanks.
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Not that I want Andrew to be in pain but what is he expecting?
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Marc is a maverick romantic. Fun yet sweetly loving chapter.
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Lisa should have walked away; arguing that government waste is status quo with Will was a bad call, at least she had the sense to call in Marc. Fine work, thanks.
